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Louis love?

Summary

*warning this book may get intense

Characters

Katie

Katie

16 and shy,she has a crush on louis and has known him since they were 3 she is a model/dancer

Lizzy

Lizzy

Is katies best friend and has known her since birth she is also louis twin sister she is also 16 and is a singer/dancer

Louis

Louis

Lizzys twin brother and thinks that her best friend katie is very fit in the story will try out for the xfactor and will become part of won direction is 16

Niall

Niall

Katies new lover?

Niall harry zayn and liam

Niall harry zayn and liam

Part of one direction and all fall in love with lizzy... Who will get the girl?

One direction!

One direction!

If you dont know these people i suggest you leave now.. Become a band iin the story

Chapters

Comments

Oh okay lol whew! Im not used to giving feedback but I was told in order to be a good writer not only do I need to accept feedback but I need to give feedback lol
Chanel_Needs_1D Chanel_Needs_1D
7/3/13
@Chanel_Needs_1D
Im not taking it the wrong way i love hearing feedback frim you guys it makes me a better writer
Makayla_horan Makayla_horan
7/3/13
Welcome, and again please don't take that the wrong way, I loved it :) I just wanted to help out a little...
Chanel_Needs_1D Chanel_Needs_1D
7/3/13
@Chanel_Needs_1D
Thanks and ill try to better with my new story!
Makayla_horan Makayla_horan
7/3/13
Umm dint take this the wrong way, I lived the storyline, like how you had the plan going ant things...I just think you rushed it a bit too much....it felt too rushed, like there was no relax moments, all of them were sooo intense....I feel like, if you were to add some relaxed parts that build up suspicion, maybe you wouldn't have gotten bored?
Chanel_Needs_1D Chanel_Needs_1D
7/3/13
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