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Louis love?

Home alone

Katies pov:
you were sitting at home watching tv and texting your best friends lizzy and louis.
- from louis
yes im bored to how about you liz

-from lizzy
yep same here we should all go out and go to a movie or something

-from you
Ok ill get ready be at lizzy's in 30!

-from louis and lizzy
ok see you then

you run into your bathroom and take a quick shower
*10 minutes later*

oh i got to hurry so you get dressed quickly http://cdn.indulgy.com/I8/M8/m5/278167714454501128zxCX6vd5c.jpg

Then you quickly do you make up http://weddingzidea.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/06/cute-makeup-styles-for-hazel-eyes.jpg

you were so exited and relized you took 40 minutes to get ready so run out you house and grab your phone keys and purse

Notes

Sorry if this is bad but this is my first time doing this please fell free to comment and please no hate ok? Thanks and enjoy :)

Comments

Oh okay lol whew! Im not used to giving feedback but I was told in order to be a good writer not only do I need to accept feedback but I need to give feedback lol
@Chanel_Needs_1D
Im not taking it the wrong way i love hearing feedback frim you guys it makes me a better writer
Makayla_horan Makayla_horan
7/3/13
Welcome, and again please don't take that the wrong way, I loved it :) I just wanted to help out a little...
@Chanel_Needs_1D
Thanks and ill try to better with my new story!
Makayla_horan Makayla_horan
7/3/13
Umm dint take this the wrong way, I lived the storyline, like how you had the plan going ant things...I just think you rushed it a bit too much....it felt too rushed, like there was no relax moments, all of them were sooo intense....I feel like, if you were to add some relaxed parts that build up suspicion, maybe you wouldn't have gotten bored?