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Louis love?

After Xfactor

Shoes:Top:Shorts:Ok so i skipped 2 years cuz i didnt want to do the whole xfactor thing so... All you need to know is you and louis are going good till you meet niall.....
Katies pov:
i was gonna be a backround dancer for ONE SIRECTION!! (Hehe fangirl moment!) im so nervous because we got paired and i was paired with niall.... So during practice we were dancing and i ended up grinding on niall. Louis looked over and saw me. He just coughed awkwardley. I blushed bright red, and ran out the building. Whats wrong with me?!?!?! Why cant i fall in love with 1 guy and stay with him!! I thought to myself. Naill and lou both came out running and pushing each other. "Guys stop!" I burst into tears.

Nialls pov:
why did i make katie cry ug im such a bad person. I walked up to her and hugged her. Katie im so sorry." I got pushed away from her by louis.

Louis pov:
Niall had the nerve to go and hug my girlfriend i could see she melted at his touch. i hugged her and nothing. "MAYBE WE SHOULD BAKEUP FOR AWALE." ( i capped it to should more emotion no to show yelling) that made katie cry i just told niall "since your so good with her why dont you go help her mate."

Naill pov:
i was shocked they broke up and louis just left her crying....

katie pov:
niall im so sorry i just cant help myself... Your so addicting." He picked my head up by my chin and kissed me. I moaned into his mouth. Mmmmmmm." He then pulled me closer i could tell he wanted me. "Katie i know you and louis just broke up but will you be my girlfriend?" Niall asked. I thought anout it for a long time... "Yes niall i would love to!" He kissed me and so i kissed him back instantly. Soon hid tongue licked my bottom lip asking for an entrance. I didnt open. Then he tickled me and i told him to stop. He took the chance and kissed me it turned into a makeout session. We stoped and he helped me off the ground, his eyes were full of love and lust.

Notes

Twist!! Hehe louis or niall i would have posted before but i had school!!

Comments

Oh okay lol whew! Im not used to giving feedback but I was told in order to be a good writer not only do I need to accept feedback but I need to give feedback lol
@Chanel_Needs_1D
Im not taking it the wrong way i love hearing feedback frim you guys it makes me a better writer
Makayla_horan Makayla_horan
7/3/13
Welcome, and again please don't take that the wrong way, I loved it :) I just wanted to help out a little...
@Chanel_Needs_1D
Thanks and ill try to better with my new story!
Makayla_horan Makayla_horan
7/3/13
Umm dint take this the wrong way, I lived the storyline, like how you had the plan going ant things...I just think you rushed it a bit too much....it felt too rushed, like there was no relax moments, all of them were sooo intense....I feel like, if you were to add some relaxed parts that build up suspicion, maybe you wouldn't have gotten bored?