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Louis love?

Kid?

Louis pov:
so today is katies first check up on OUR baby. Im so nervous what if she doesnt want it. What if she has a miscarriage. Oh, im so nervous!!!!... Miss katie Santamogo. a nurse said. I followed katie in the room.

katie pov:
im so nervous but not as much as lou he could be sweating and it wouldnt make a difference. Miss katie santamogo. A nurse said. I just follower he rinto the room with lou right behing me. She asked if everything had been ok. I answered with a yes ma am to show some respect. She put some gel like stuff on my stomach and trust me this stuff is C.O.L.D! Then she hooked up the ultasound thing. And youll never guess what happenend.... " miss santamogo your having twins congratulations" she said. I was speechless "twin i asked tein your sure?" "Yes miss santamogo." I looked over at lou it looked like he was about to cry. "Lou you ok?" I asked. "Yes im fine" and hewalled over and kissed me. It turned into a makeout session. The nurse coughed awkwardly and my cheeks fluttered to a bright red.

Notes

What will happen twins?!??!?

Comments

Oh okay lol whew! Im not used to giving feedback but I was told in order to be a good writer not only do I need to accept feedback but I need to give feedback lol
@Chanel_Needs_1D
Im not taking it the wrong way i love hearing feedback frim you guys it makes me a better writer
Makayla_horan Makayla_horan
7/3/13
Welcome, and again please don't take that the wrong way, I loved it :) I just wanted to help out a little...
@Chanel_Needs_1D
Thanks and ill try to better with my new story!
Makayla_horan Makayla_horan
7/3/13
Umm dint take this the wrong way, I lived the storyline, like how you had the plan going ant things...I just think you rushed it a bit too much....it felt too rushed, like there was no relax moments, all of them were sooo intense....I feel like, if you were to add some relaxed parts that build up suspicion, maybe you wouldn't have gotten bored?