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Homepage › Stories › Louis love? › Chapter 3

Louis love?

NOT A CHAPTER!!

I would love for you to rate comment like and tell me anything you like/dislike about this story and forgot to say that i will try to post a new chapter everyday at least

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Oh okay lol whew! Im not used to giving feedback but I was told in order to be a good writer not only do I need to accept feedback but I need to give feedback lol
Chanel_Needs_1D Chanel_Needs_1D
7/3/13
@Chanel_Needs_1D
Im not taking it the wrong way i love hearing feedback frim you guys it makes me a better writer
Makayla_horan Makayla_horan
7/3/13
Welcome, and again please don't take that the wrong way, I loved it :) I just wanted to help out a little...
Chanel_Needs_1D Chanel_Needs_1D
7/3/13
@Chanel_Needs_1D
Thanks and ill try to better with my new story!
Makayla_horan Makayla_horan
7/3/13
Umm dint take this the wrong way, I lived the storyline, like how you had the plan going ant things...I just think you rushed it a bit too much....it felt too rushed, like there was no relax moments, all of them were sooo intense....I feel like, if you were to add some relaxed parts that build up suspicion, maybe you wouldn't have gotten bored?
Chanel_Needs_1D Chanel_Needs_1D
7/3/13
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