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Louis love?

The twists

Lizzy pov:
should i go look for katie? Im gonna text her...
-from lizzy
katie where are you im worried and im sorry im glad it was you insted of some slut and im sorry text me back plz... Ps i love u!!
louis pov:
-from louis
katie where are you i miss you and im sorry im gonna find you and help you lizzy over reacted! Im sorry and i love you
-from katie
im at the beach and she already txt me sayin sorry just plz dont tell her im her and i love you too!! xx

Katie pov
i just told louis were i was and 5 mins. Later he was here all i could do was drop the razor and cry. Louis finally saw me and ran to me and hug me. I felt safe and loved. He lifted my head up by grabbing my chin. He kissed my forhead. " i love you katie and im sorry oh and last night the condom broke... Im so sorry" he whispered. I started freaking out and crying. "Lou what if im pregnant you wont want a child in your life and what about you xfactor addition in three months?" I said. "Katie look at me..... Its up to you if you want to have a child ill be here to support him or her. Ok and dont worry im not gonna leave i love you to much." Louis said. I kissed him and cried. " i love you too!"

Notes

Kinda a dramatic twists right!....

Comments

Oh okay lol whew! Im not used to giving feedback but I was told in order to be a good writer not only do I need to accept feedback but I need to give feedback lol
@Chanel_Needs_1D
Im not taking it the wrong way i love hearing feedback frim you guys it makes me a better writer
Makayla_horan Makayla_horan
7/3/13
Welcome, and again please don't take that the wrong way, I loved it :) I just wanted to help out a little...
@Chanel_Needs_1D
Thanks and ill try to better with my new story!
Makayla_horan Makayla_horan
7/3/13
Umm dint take this the wrong way, I lived the storyline, like how you had the plan going ant things...I just think you rushed it a bit too much....it felt too rushed, like there was no relax moments, all of them were sooo intense....I feel like, if you were to add some relaxed parts that build up suspicion, maybe you wouldn't have gotten bored?