Louis love? - Comments

Oh okay lol whew! Im not used to giving feedback but I was told in order to be a good writer not only do I need to accept feedback but I need to give feedback lol

@Chanel_Needs_1D
Im not taking it the wrong way i love hearing feedback frim you guys it makes me a better writer

Welcome, and again please don't take that the wrong way, I loved it :) I just wanted to help out a little...

@Chanel_Needs_1D
Thanks and ill try to better with my new story!

Umm dint take this the wrong way, I lived the storyline, like how you had the plan going ant things...I just think you rushed it a bit too much....it felt too rushed, like there was no relax moments, all of them were sooo intense....I feel like, if you were to add some relaxed parts that build up suspicion, maybe you wouldn't have gotten bored?

@iiampayn
Thank you!!

@managerofnandos thank you

Hey i really liked your fan fiction!

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@you can find him next to me thx

you need to describe what is going on with more details and tell it in 3rd person from but alow use to see whatkatie is thinking at the same time, but the story has a pretty good plot