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Louis love?

Club part 2

I giggled at his comment and kissed him he kissed and sucked on my neck hitting my sweet spot i could feel him smirk against my body everytime i moaned. He kissed down stoping at my breast and then at my stomach. I could feel his head at my core his hot breath making me wet every second. The he kissed my wet folds making me moan. And with out warning he inserted 2 fingers making me gasp for air everytime he pumped them in and out. LOUIS IM GONNA.... CUM!!! He pulled his fingers out and i beged him for more then he stuck his his hard cock in my pussy. Ugh katie your so tight" he said. He thrust in harder everytime hitting my g spot.... He put his hand and rubbed my clit. Ugh im gonna come!!" I said. "Me too on three " louis said. We counted together one... two.... three" and we both can screaming eachothers names and cursing. He kissed me softly and said " i love you katie i have since we were 13" and with that i kissed him and we fell asleep cuddling.

Notes

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Comments

Oh okay lol whew! Im not used to giving feedback but I was told in order to be a good writer not only do I need to accept feedback but I need to give feedback lol
@Chanel_Needs_1D
Im not taking it the wrong way i love hearing feedback frim you guys it makes me a better writer
Makayla_horan Makayla_horan
7/3/13
Welcome, and again please don't take that the wrong way, I loved it :) I just wanted to help out a little...
@Chanel_Needs_1D
Thanks and ill try to better with my new story!
Makayla_horan Makayla_horan
7/3/13
Umm dint take this the wrong way, I lived the storyline, like how you had the plan going ant things...I just think you rushed it a bit too much....it felt too rushed, like there was no relax moments, all of them were sooo intense....I feel like, if you were to add some relaxed parts that build up suspicion, maybe you wouldn't have gotten bored?