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Louis love?

Movies!!

Outfit: Katies pov:
Me and Niall left practice early and hung out. We went to the movies and just watched a movie. I invited lizzy but she was busy so... Oh well. We went and watched "mama" niall knows i hate scary movies yet he took me to one.. I got scared and grabbed his hand. Everytime i got scaredI squeezed his hand and just to let me know he was there he would squeeze mine softly. After the movie we went back to his place and of course lou was there so i decided to have some fun... I kissed niall hard. Soon our lips were in sync and i could tell lou was getting pissed at niall..

Niall pov:
Katie kissed me out of no-were and then i saw louis oh great ill hear about this later i thought. Then i kissed katie back. Our lips were in sync and things got heated. I wanted her.... so bad.

louis pov:
I walked in the room and katie kissed niall. What a slut.... I thought. Oh there both gonna hear about this later. Then i glaced up and they should be having sex at what there doing. "God yall get a room." I said.

katies pov:

Yes! It worked... Hehehehe lou is so mad im so proud of myself. Go me! I thought to myself.

Notes

Sorry i havent uploaded :'( ive had school and stuff so yea what did yall think and DONT FORGET TOCOMMENT RATE AND SUBSCRIBE!!! Plz i need ppl to see this so help get the word out

Comments

Oh okay lol whew! Im not used to giving feedback but I was told in order to be a good writer not only do I need to accept feedback but I need to give feedback lol
@Chanel_Needs_1D
Im not taking it the wrong way i love hearing feedback frim you guys it makes me a better writer
Makayla_horan Makayla_horan
7/3/13
Welcome, and again please don't take that the wrong way, I loved it :) I just wanted to help out a little...
@Chanel_Needs_1D
Thanks and ill try to better with my new story!
Makayla_horan Makayla_horan
7/3/13
Umm dint take this the wrong way, I lived the storyline, like how you had the plan going ant things...I just think you rushed it a bit too much....it felt too rushed, like there was no relax moments, all of them were sooo intense....I feel like, if you were to add some relaxed parts that build up suspicion, maybe you wouldn't have gotten bored?