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Louis love?

MOVIE/GETTING READY FOR CLUBBING

So we were halfway through the movie and i started getting bored then the dry sex secen come up and i looked over at louis and of course he was getting a boner..... I patted him on the back and whispered "louis i think you have a little problem." And i pointed at his pants. "Yes i do actually." Then i suggested we go and something else. So louis grabed lizzy's wrist and we went to the car. I told him i would have to change. So i asked him if he could take me to my place so i could get changed. red_leather_animal_print/set?id=80927835 was my outfit

Comments

Oh okay lol whew! Im not used to giving feedback but I was told in order to be a good writer not only do I need to accept feedback but I need to give feedback lol
@Chanel_Needs_1D
Im not taking it the wrong way i love hearing feedback frim you guys it makes me a better writer
Makayla_horan Makayla_horan
7/3/13
Welcome, and again please don't take that the wrong way, I loved it :) I just wanted to help out a little...
@Chanel_Needs_1D
Thanks and ill try to better with my new story!
Makayla_horan Makayla_horan
7/3/13
Umm dint take this the wrong way, I lived the storyline, like how you had the plan going ant things...I just think you rushed it a bit too much....it felt too rushed, like there was no relax moments, all of them were sooo intense....I feel like, if you were to add some relaxed parts that build up suspicion, maybe you wouldn't have gotten bored?