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Reviews, Tips and What-Not

Sex...

Sex.. I'm going to jump straight into this one!

So... Sex... Don't write about it (or read this) if you don't know what it is!

Here's some tips on how to write about it (if you do know what it is):

*Adjectives. If you suck at writing sex scenes (much like myself) using some descriptive words will improve it!

*Read others' sex scenes. You'll get inspiration and it could teach you a lot!

*You get what sex is, but you may not know the things involved in it. If you don't know what 'wet', 'dry', 'cum', 'g-spot', 'valley', 'clit', 'eat you out', or 'fuck', mean - or any word(s) in a sex scene you don't know mean - you better find out before writing one!

*If you're crap at writing sex scenes, don't worry. Keep practicing - you'll improve!

*Most people, not all, but most, on here won't read your story unless its rated R or NC-17 or contains sexual content. Don't make this, in anyway, put pressure on you to rate your story higher than you'd like or write about sex.. YOU DO NOT HAVE TO DO IT!

*Lastly, DO NOT WRITE ABOUT SEX IF YOU FEEL UNCOMFORTABLE WITH IT OR ANYTHING ELSE LIKE THAT!! As I said before, you really don't have to if you don't want to...

So, there ya have it! Hope this helps you with your saucy writing ;-) <3

Notes

:-) If there's mistakes, etc, in this update its because I didn't have time to edit. Hope you like it anyway! (There may not be mistakes... idk yet)


Comments

@kkgal14
Thanks. ;) I would love to do the review. It will be up as soon as i get it done :)

DarlingKK_123 DarlingKK_123
1/27/15

Could you review my story Ink? I loved the underused chapter. You make some valid arguments my friend xx.

kkgal14 kkgal14
1/27/15

Omg I totally agree. I will check your story out. What really pisses me off is I've used many of these ideas that have not been noticed. I had this one story called Desiree, which is about this girl who is madly obsessed with Harry, and does all of these wicked things to be with him. She's the criminal/psycho lol! I also did a story once where the girl was the player, and Harry's the new kid. So, almost every boy in the high school worships over this girl, even the girls at the school suck up to her, which gives this girl a big head. But the thing is, Harry sees nothing great about her, while she's crushing on him. She asks him out several times, doing all kinds of things to get him to like her back, but gets rejected by him over and over again, which she's not used to happening. At the end, what's supposed to happen is the girl finally sees why Harry doesn't like her; because she treats everyone terribly and believes popularity is everything. Slowly, gradually she begins to change her ways on her own, and Harry likes who she's become. It was a decent story line in my opinion, but no one was interested in reading it back then. I could tell you so many of my story ideas that I have. There's many that are different from what's on this site.

One Direction 1O1 One Direction 1O1
1/27/15

I'm interested in the underused chapter coming up. I'm alway looking for tips. :)

xRockMex xRockMex
1/26/15

I'm over the whole Darcy thing! It drives me crazy when in a fan fiction the main character and Harry end up naming their baby girl Darcy. My friend told me she read a Niall fan fic where his little girls name was Darcy. Wtf??

One Direction 1O1 One Direction 1O1
1/26/15
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