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Reviews, Tips and What-Not

#Overused 2

Okay (I say okay a lot...) I'm going to get hard on you guys now. Today I had a fanfiction day where I sat at my laptop screen all day and read and read and read...

I noticed that nearly every story was the same and that some things were just so fucking overused. So here is #Overused 2: The shit that's used way to often...

*Starbucks. OMFG this is used way to much! My only comment: we do not care that's they're going to fucking Starbucks as long as they just get that fucking coffee!!

*Phone types. 'My Samsung Galaxy 3 Mini is ringing.' 'I read the text on my iPhone 5s.' Sorry, but we don't care! Just using 'my phone' is fine!

*'I don't know who One Direction are but I'm falling in love with one of the members'. Are they living under a rock?!

*Showers. Not everyone has one every single hour of everyday '_'

*I'm falling for my kidnapper'. I know most people LOVE these stories but... Personally? I wouldn't fall in love with my kidnapper

*Ariana Grande. Dafuq?

Glad I got that off my chest!



Notes

Sorry got a bit carried away "_"
I'm now doing shout outs! How it works is:
If you don't want your story to get reviewed but would like to get it somehow noticed or advertised etc.. then just comment or message me your story asking me to give you a shout out. It'll look like this:

Shout out to 'Rain Coat' by Mothafucka (sorry, first thing to mind). Dont forget.. request chapter types and reviews! (I can do private reviews) (you can privately request) Xx

Comments

@kkgal14
Thanks. ;) I would love to do the review. It will be up as soon as i get it done :)

DarlingKK_123 DarlingKK_123
1/27/15

Could you review my story Ink? I loved the underused chapter. You make some valid arguments my friend xx.

kkgal14 kkgal14
1/27/15

Omg I totally agree. I will check your story out. What really pisses me off is I've used many of these ideas that have not been noticed. I had this one story called Desiree, which is about this girl who is madly obsessed with Harry, and does all of these wicked things to be with him. She's the criminal/psycho lol! I also did a story once where the girl was the player, and Harry's the new kid. So, almost every boy in the high school worships over this girl, even the girls at the school suck up to her, which gives this girl a big head. But the thing is, Harry sees nothing great about her, while she's crushing on him. She asks him out several times, doing all kinds of things to get him to like her back, but gets rejected by him over and over again, which she's not used to happening. At the end, what's supposed to happen is the girl finally sees why Harry doesn't like her; because she treats everyone terribly and believes popularity is everything. Slowly, gradually she begins to change her ways on her own, and Harry likes who she's become. It was a decent story line in my opinion, but no one was interested in reading it back then. I could tell you so many of my story ideas that I have. There's many that are different from what's on this site.

One Direction 1O1 One Direction 1O1
1/27/15

I'm interested in the underused chapter coming up. I'm alway looking for tips. :)

xRockMex xRockMex
1/26/15

I'm over the whole Darcy thing! It drives me crazy when in a fan fiction the main character and Harry end up naming their baby girl Darcy. My friend told me she read a Niall fan fic where his little girls name was Darcy. Wtf??

One Direction 1O1 One Direction 1O1
1/26/15
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