Reviews, Tips and What-Not - Comments

@kkgal14
Thanks. ;) I would love to do the review. It will be up as soon as i get it done :)

Could you review my story Ink? I loved the underused chapter. You make some valid arguments my friend xx.

Omg I totally agree. I will check your story out. What really pisses me off is I've used many of these ideas that have not been noticed. I had this one story called Desiree, which is about this girl who is madly obsessed with Harry, and does all of these wicked things to be with him. She's the criminal/psycho lol! I also did a story once where the girl was the player, and Harry's the new kid. So, almost every boy in the high school worships over this girl, even the girls at the school suck up to her, which gives this girl a big head. But the thing is, Harry sees nothing great about her, while she's crushing on him. She asks him out several times, doing all kinds of things to get him to like her back, but gets rejected by him over and over again, which she's not used to happening. At the end, what's supposed to happen is the girl finally sees why Harry doesn't like her; because she treats everyone terribly and believes popularity is everything. Slowly, gradually she begins to change her ways on her own, and Harry likes who she's become. It was a decent story line in my opinion, but no one was interested in reading it back then. I could tell you so many of my story ideas that I have. There's many that are different from what's on this site.

I'm interested in the underused chapter coming up. I'm alway looking for tips. :)

I'm over the whole Darcy thing! It drives me crazy when in a fan fiction the main character and Harry end up naming their baby girl Darcy. My friend told me she read a Niall fan fic where his little girls name was Darcy. Wtf??

@One Direction 1O1
glad someone can relate to me ;)

Omg I hate when people put Ariana Grande in their story! I literally go insane when I see her in the character list, as the main character. Like, can writers put someone we haven't seem yet as a character? I totally agree with you on everything. Especially the Starbucks one. I'd rather have a character say they work at Goodwill instead of Starbucks just to change it up a bit lol.

Thank you, I'll use your advice for the future :)

@Jules . Tomlinson
Of course would love too! I'll start it right now...

Can you review my newest story Menacing? It would mean a lot :)

@Anobrxin


No need to be sorry, it was a good story and the mistakes were very small and understandable.It was great, well done!!

I apologize for my mistakes. English isn't my first language, lol. But thank you for the review. Xx

Thanks for the review. :) Merry Christmas!

@Anobrxin
Sure can. Read the waiting list in my latest chapter to see when your review is coming up!

Can you review my story Xenophobia? (: xx

@AKK_123
I'll be sure to fix those errors right away. I was recently made a co author to that story so I've only written .03 and .05 but thanks for the review :)

@kkgal14
Much better :) xx
I've just posted The Beast At Midnight so check that out ;)

Thanks for the review. I just spent the last 30 minutes picture hunting. Hopefully I found better pictures, will you let me know? Xx

@A girl with a dream
I totally could ASAP

Hiya! Could you review my story 'Incomplete'? Take your time :)