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Homepage › Stories › Speak Up - Where We Share What We Think › Chapter 11

Speak Up - Where We Share What We Think

We meet, we kiss, we love.

One thing I really get wound up about is:
Day One:
Boy meets Girl, he likes her straight away.
They kiss
They start to say I love you...

What the hell happened to the whole build up? where's the tension that's supposed to keep me wanting more? How am I supposed to be excited for an update if it's already going 80mph. They will probably be married or expecting a baby by day four.

You writers know who you are, so please just slow it down a little!

Notes

Comments

I like SparklesGirly

BlueButterfly BlueButterfly @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
11/24/14

I'm with you on slavery ..... a lot of people read them because It turns into a sappy love story

elasticheart. elasticheart. @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
11/18/14

@KAOT
THANK YOU!!
I'm thrilled that someone thinks the same as me.
I like it when it takes a while for them to fall in love, I like the idea of mentally screaming to myself when they finally get together
;)

Styles_Love Styles_Love
11/1/14

I couldn't agree more. It bothers me to no end when they are in love in chapter 2. I think people are confused with love and lust. I know no one who has met someone and fallen in love in 24 hours. I think that's why my characters in my stories take forever to fall in love because I just don't think it's realistic to happen so quickly!

Love every single chapter so far, it's everything I agree with and try to avoid! :)

KAOT KAOT @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
11/1/14

@softballchick79
I agree with you. When there is numerous of spelling mistakes, it instantly starts to lose your attention.
An abusing Harry is awful, I'm always put off story's that contain him being violent and all that.
It's nice to hear from someone who is a Liam's girl, makes a change :)

Thanks for taking part!

Styles_Love Styles_Love
11/1/14
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