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punk romeo and dark Juliet

chapter 3

Autumn P.O.V.
Cecilia and i reached thr house Danielle told us to go. She said we will be meeting the north gang members here. I was told to not hesitate to kick ass if they didn't cooperate. I dont know why, but i dare not to question her reasoning.. i trusted her if she says i don't need to know...i don't need to know. I snapped out of my thoughts when Cc said "look!" as she pointed to a gray car pull up. The north!
When the car doors opened a tall boy with really brown curly hair and beautiful green eyes came from the car first. The one driving got out next.. he then spotted me and Cecilia and started speed walking tords our direction.
he then got in my face."what the hell are you doing here!!!!" he spat with a hissing tone. " why the hell should i tell you...you ainy my daddy! and you could mind your own fucking buiness!! just turn the fuck around and head home or things might just get ugly!!!" i spat back but with more of a sassy fire. " fuck you bitch!!!" he said with confidince. cc came up behind me warning him to stay back when the boy with curly hair came behind his friend. i whispered to cc to get back. She was fully aware of what was going to happen. " what are you going to do... sass us to death" he said with a cocky tone. that's when i snapped... my fist flew up and slammed curly to the floor. I knew he was to shocked to fight back so i continued to slam my fist against his face.
Once his friend was out of shock he pulled me off of curly. athat's when i felt a sting on my cheek. that's when i kneed him in the balls with all my might making him fall to the floor in pain. Just then i grabbed a rock but cc took me away before i could slam it against his already damaged face. we then walked away leaving the two boy's on the floor in pain. I felt good, i always love showing boys im much more bad ass then them.
Harry's P.O.V.
Damn! that shit hurt. that girl was a fucking time bomb!! she broke lous nose and lou still not walking with the balls situation....poor guy. I have a few cuts here and there. After she hit me i went cold only to wake up with Zayn pacing back and forth.. he looked really pissed off. " what the hell happen!!!!" he yelled " thancks to you and lou we lost of $100!!!!" .. that's why they were there. Those bitches wanted to to steal our money. FUCK!!! i see how they want to play.. lets play...







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