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@i am a directioner
Okay...I know I'm seriously going to sound needy here...but could you read my story, I know people say and comment that it's good but honestly I'm not too sure. I just want advice from people who have "experience" so to speak, on writing storys that are amazing, like yours, on how to make my story better. So, if it's not too much trouble, could you? I mean you don't have to if you don't want to..it's just that...well...yeah, I'm just going to stop before thing get awkwarder (is that a word...to bad, fuck grammar, I just made up a word.)
Okay...I know I'm seriously going to sound needy here...but could you read my story, I know people say and comment that it's good but honestly I'm not too sure. I just want advice from people who have "experience" so to speak, on writing storys that are amazing, like yours, on how to make my story better. So, if it's not too much trouble, could you? I mean you don't have to if you don't want to..it's just that...well...yeah, I'm just going to stop before thing get awkwarder (is that a word...to bad, fuck grammar, I just made up a word.)
You could have have Cecilia tell Danny about Harry, and then Danny goes after Harry to kill him. But Autumn comes in to save Harry's ass, and just as Danny pulls the trigger, Autumn jumps in front of Harry and takes the bullet for him...but it's just a suggestion.
You could have have Cecilia tell Danny about Harry, and then Danny goes after Harry to kill him. But Autumn comes in to save Harry's ass, and just as Danny pulls the trigger, Autumn jumps in front of Harry and takes the bullet for him...but it's just a suggestion.
11/24/13