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punk romeo and dark Juliet

chapter 2

Harry P.O.V.

beep beep beep... *slam* COME ON!!! I really dont want to go to school today. oh well, just might as well skip again for the third week in row. You can't blam me, i work for Zayn. I slowly sit up in bed and rub my eyes... itis no use i might as well go to back to bed. I was about to lay back down untill i got a text.

lou: hey hazz.. Zayn wants us to collect some money from this one guy.. get your ass out here

me:dude, i just woke up give me a sec..
he tried to text me back but i ignored it.

Once i finished getting ready i walked outside to find lou waiting ... i guess he was waiting a long time because once he seen me he turned his car back on. "what the hell too you so long!!!" lou shot at me once i stepped into the passengers side. "i told you i had barly woken up when you texted me." lou rolled his eyes as drove off. "man, Zayn's gonna be pissed" lou whispered under his breath. "well we will find out once we get there" i said while lou gave me a ' your gonna get your ass beat'

Notes

so this was th second chapter.. was it any better?
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Comments

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@Candy monster
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@Candy monster
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