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punk romeo and dark Juliet

chapter 4

Harry's pov

I walked over and sat on my couch. i slowly raised my hand to the the scars, once i touched the scars i felt slight sting 'shh, ahh.. ouch!' i whispered to myself. I then grab the remote turning to my favorite channel. When it got to commercial I decided to text Niall.

Me: Hey niller, whats up?

Niall: nothing.. what about you, i didn't see you at the club last night.

Me: oh, zayn put me on suspension. :/

Niall: ok im comin over so u can explain it to me

Me: ok..

It actually wasn't ok.. what was going to explain ' lou and i got our ass kicked by a girl and they stole our money' well it's a lot easier in my mind, but still.

10 minutes later...
*knock! knock! knock!*
i heard at a knock on the door. I automatically knew it was Niall. When i opened my door to see Niall.. and Lou? what was he doing here. "hey" I answered so i didn't seem rude. Niall didn't look happy. " what happened to you and Lou?"Niall said with edge in his voice.

it went silent..

"come on tell me!!"
Lou couldn't it in much longer " some girl kicked our ass and sole our money" Lou had a shame in his eyes. Niall began to give a cheeky smile with a following laugh. My cheeks than heated as i hide my face behind the closest pillow i could find. Niall then began to laugh even harder.

Autumn's pov

I walked to the front door pulling out my keys. once i opened the door i wave Cc bye as she drove away. When i walk into the kitchen i looked the time on the clock, "12:00" i whispered. I then hear a small mouse like voice, when i turned around crizzy's small arms wrapped my neck. I lifted her off the floor spinning her around and placed her back on the floor. " what are you doing up?" i lightly spoke, making sure i didn't wake up ever body else in the house. " i couldn't sleep... i want you to read a bed-time story" she insolently spoke summing it up with her signature smile. I couldn't help but smiling back. i lifter her up again, this time sitting her on my shoulder as I walked her up stairs. I heard her yawn before i place her down, I turned and grabbed the book behind me until i heard light snore escape my sisters lips.
i place the book back down and looked at her peaceful face. i slightly smirked, i moved the strands of hair covering her face and pushed then behind her ear. I gently kissed her cheek 'I love you so much, if anything were to happen to you.. I don't know what i would do.' I then gave her another kiss,this time I placed it on her forehead.

i walked into my room and stared get ready for bed. I hopped into my pj's then wiping my worn-out make-up from my face. once i wiped over my left cheek I felt a sharp pain. My hand quickly jolted back away from my face. in curiosity i again raised my fingers to the hand shaped bruise on my cheek. 'that fucker from the north did this!!' my opinion.. he earned every bit of pain i gave him.
i finished getting ready and started to lay down. i closed my eyes to rest.

Notes

so i think it's getting better.. what about you?
oh, and thank you for the comments. you make me want to keep going :D

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Comments

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