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Friends with Benefits - Comments, page 3
i only got to chapter two before i had to stop reading, i was finding it very familiar. and then i picked up 'fifty shades of grey' and saw you were writing it practically word for word. maybe try something a bit more original, yeah? then you wont get slammed by people for plagiarizing a well known book series.
@Ephu
@AdriVasHappenin
Thank you so much for the lovely comments! Please subscribe to the sequel, Forever and Always! Love you so much berries! :*
@AdriVasHappenin
Thank you so much for the lovely comments! Please subscribe to the sequel, Forever and Always! Love you so much berries! :*
OMG..!!This fanfic is awwsum..I just finished reading it....I've been reading this fanfic..but I never commented...but i thought that you need some appreciation for this awwsum fanfic.. :)
In the sequel I think holly should be with either niall or Louis. Idk why but I think either niall or Louis should be hollys bf
ehh its cool and i fucking LOVED it bby don't stop writing fanfic! thank you and btw im filipino too
@imwingelstyles
i don't know it's the chapter when all the guys had a boner because of holly and started texting xD
i don't know it's the chapter when all the guys had a boner because of holly and started texting xD
8/5/13