Friends with Benefits - Comments, page 2

The end?
AWWWW Come on!

Chapter 56
It killed me! THE VIDEO KILLED ME!
SEE YA IN HEAVEN! ;)

@NiallsNandos
Good.......
MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA..............................
RANDOMNESSSSS
I got bullied so..ya good I dont want that bullshit experience again!

@Musically Love

god no . I hate bullies .

@NiallsNandos
I know you well enough (Kinda) to know you'd not be a bully to anyone...

@swimrgurl22

lol sorry , I didn't mean to make you feel stupid . I was just letting you know haha :)

@NiallsNandos

I just wanted to say...


thank you for making me realize im an idiot! No sarcasm intended. That really made me feel stupid. :) haha

Chapter 7;
Zayn;
"Every Damn Night." Zayn groans in his pillow.
I would do the same.

@swimrgurl22

50 Shades of Grey . they're talking about 50 Shades of Grey . the REAL book .

ALRIGHT PEOPLE. I realize so many people hav been thinking that some scenes from this story were stolen from 50 Shades of 1D, but i hav something to say. I read Friends w/ Benifits while it was still incomplete, and 50 shades either didnt exist, or was nowhere near popular. Maybe it was the
other way around. Edit: NEVER MIND

OK so I'm reading these comments and people keep saying that you stole from another author and you copied 50 Shades of Grey . I never read 50 Shades so i dont know if thats true or not , but i do know what its like to be stolen from . A girl was copying my story , literally word for word , and posting it on quotev . It really doesnt feel good to get stolen from because its like , you put all your time and hard work into a story to make it good , and then somebody else comes along and steals it and claims it as theirs . Just be honest , and if you did steal those sex scenes from 50 Shades , change them and if you did basically copy this story from another author , change it and maybe you wont get all this hate in your comments . This is just a suggestion . You dont have to do it , but i recommend you do . Have a nice day :)

your story is really good keep it up

@Hailey
Thanks for the compliment? Insult? I don't careeeeeeeee ;)

Okay seriously chapter 4 is practically word for word fifty shades of grey.. I mean come on. Show some originality. What did you do just copy and paste it?

OKAY WOW SERIOUSLY JUST COMPARED THE WRITING. All you did was change the names. Lammmmeee

Sexy... Do more sex scenes

:)

OMG!!! Dude this is amaZAYN... I love it and I love you.

@Jayy

Lol dude I love you :D Busted. Read my story? Unpredictable, it's a Marcel sad story. (Just a tab sad)

@Jayy

Lol dude I love you :D Busted. Read my story? Unpredictable, it's a Marcel sad story. (Just a tab sad)

@#22498
I'm 15, how about you?