Friends with Benefits - Comments

Hey do you guys know the name of the song in Chapter 46?? I really loved the lyrics and really want to listen to the song.

I've already read this and I still laugh at the end of chapter 7.

@Lordesugaroes
Keep reading it :) it gets better. I thought that at first too but then i was like "okay its called "Friends With Benefits" what can you expect?" I personally love the story :)

Im sorry in on ch 26 and so far u make holly seem like a whore theirs nothing to her shes just a slag and unlikable

I love your story I cant stop reading them. Oh and I love the song on chapter 19 it was on Twilight

So hot (Harold)

OMG when is the sequel going to be up....The suspense

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I think the mermaid fan-fiction Is an amazayn idea

Holly should have beat Taylor up

@BlackRose009
It gets way better trust me.

Wow. Well I lost interest when I realized it was a copied scene from 50 shades of grey.

So I recently just started this fanfic, and I really like it! However, that is until I also started reading fifty shades of grey and read the exact same sex scene you had in chapter four, practically word for word. You have a great talent with writing, so I was disappointed when I saw the copied scene. There should have been credit given to the actual author, EL James, or you should have written your own scene.

I hope this doesn't come off too harsh, but it just doesn't sit well with me that you would try to take credit for the scene.

@swimrgurl22

thanks ! ^.^

@NiallsNandos

ik. Btw i luv ur story about ariella w/ BrooklynLovesMarcel
its fab!

Omgosh I'm barley on the first chapter its getting inters

You should write that fan fiction if you haven't already. The uh mermaid one!!!!

@LINZLUVS
It is the same.

Isn't this the exact same sex scene from Fifty Shades of Grey. If it is I'm kinda disappointed because would of loved the love scenes to be original

Love this so much!!!