❇R e v i e w s
Headmaster Styles
Grammar- There was a few tiny mistakes with spelling, but nothing too major; nothing you can't go back and fix. Otherwise, the grammar was good.
Plot line- When I first checked your story out, and by the cover I thought it was gonna be one of those Daddy Kinks; which by the way are over written, but then I saw that it was not. Seriously, this is probably one of the best stories on here I've read in a while. You are truly a talented writer. The whole plot line is well thought out, diverse, intriguing. The chemistry between Harry and Ana gives me feels lol. I'm not usually a big fan of romance stories, but this one is so different in a good way; a different way that's hard to explain. Each chapter I looked forward to reading. You had me interested right away. I don't have anything bad to say about this story; it's appealing, well wrote!
Summary- The summary is nice. It builds up intrigue, which is good. It makes me want to dig right into the story. Also, love that you added a soundtrack; I love when stories do that! Great touch.
Cover- Love the cover photo! It's so mysterious; gives me chills. Nice job.
Characters- I love how you portrayed Harry in the story. His personality was so different than how other authors make him to be in stories. Ana's a great character as well, and her personality fits well with the story. You have great character buildup. I felt connected with the characters in the story.
What should be changed or fixed- Nothing, honestly. There's just simply a few grammar errors, but that's is it. The plot line is perfect, the characters are well developed. Everything is great!
Overall rating- I love this story! Honest, I at first didn't think I would, but wow that totally changed. You have mad writing skills, girl. I definitely will be continuing to read this book. Overall rating I give Headmaster Styles is a 10. You have my vote and subscribe! Can't wait for more updates!
Plot line- When I first checked your story out, and by the cover I thought it was gonna be one of those Daddy Kinks; which by the way are over written, but then I saw that it was not. Seriously, this is probably one of the best stories on here I've read in a while. You are truly a talented writer. The whole plot line is well thought out, diverse, intriguing. The chemistry between Harry and Ana gives me feels lol. I'm not usually a big fan of romance stories, but this one is so different in a good way; a different way that's hard to explain. Each chapter I looked forward to reading. You had me interested right away. I don't have anything bad to say about this story; it's appealing, well wrote!
Summary- The summary is nice. It builds up intrigue, which is good. It makes me want to dig right into the story. Also, love that you added a soundtrack; I love when stories do that! Great touch.
Cover- Love the cover photo! It's so mysterious; gives me chills. Nice job.
Characters- I love how you portrayed Harry in the story. His personality was so different than how other authors make him to be in stories. Ana's a great character as well, and her personality fits well with the story. You have great character buildup. I felt connected with the characters in the story.
What should be changed or fixed- Nothing, honestly. There's just simply a few grammar errors, but that's is it. The plot line is perfect, the characters are well developed. Everything is great!
Overall rating- I love this story! Honest, I at first didn't think I would, but wow that totally changed. You have mad writing skills, girl. I definitely will be continuing to read this book. Overall rating I give Headmaster Styles is a 10. You have my vote and subscribe! Can't wait for more updates!
Notes
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@lukes bae
I'll get started on your review as soon as I can, dear. :)
4/22/15