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Name: Lukesbae
Title: Bad Girl Project
Link: click here
Short summary: Amy is practically invisible at school. Amy and her best friend come up with a plan to make the boy she likes crawl after her. But is there something that she loves holding her back? She changes her style, hair, and friends. But by accident she gets caught up in all of her lies. Can she save herself?
certain focus: summary, cover art, what needs to be improved
why it's necessary: I need this because I'm worried my story is not up to par. Also I would love to see other point of views besides myself.
@One Direction 1O1
Thanks for this awesome review! I am feeling poorly and am ill, so seeing your review truly lightened my mood!
Thank you so, so much!
Name: Zaynlove (Lauryn)
Story Name: Visiting Hours
Link: http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/39084/Visiting-Hours/
Short Summary: When Harry Styles was given a second chance at life he ended up with 700 hours of community service in the children's ward of the local hospital. There he meets Zayn, a 5 year old suffering from cancer. Visiting Hours follows the journeys of a man finding himself and a boy fighting for his life.
What certain things would you like me to focus on: e.g. Grammar or Set out. Plot Line, Summary, Cover, Characters, What should be changed or fixed
Why do you think your review is necessary: I've gotten mixed signals about the story being too sad I just want some input.
@Escapist
I'm gonna have your review up ASAP. I've been busy and unsure if even I should continue with the reviews. But I am, and I'll have your review up right away!
Hey! Yeah, I know I've already asked you to do a review, but I was wondering if you could do another for me?
Name: Emily (Emily_is_a_penguin)
Story Name: Is This The End?
Link:http://www.5secondsofsummerfanfiction.com/Story/69381/Is-This-The-End/
Summary: Sophie, Danni, Carly, and Winter are all bullied by Ashton, Calum, Luke, and Michael. The night that the story starts, Danni vanishes. No one knows where she is, until it is confirmed that she is kidnapped. One by one, the girls start disappearing, and no one has a clue where they are. Who has kidnapped them? Or more importantly, why?
Focus on: The story in general
I think the review is necessary because I'm not sure if it is very good...
Thank you!
Name: Kat, but my alias on here is Escapist
Story Name: Brontide
Link: http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/71030/Brontide/
Short Summary: Brontide drags you into a dystopian future (or rather present), where society has changed badly. Inspired by the "The purge" concept, the story portraits the life's of a few teenagers during the annual week-long cleansing, and the weeks before that.
Some are blinded by the ideology, others have seen too much and all of them have to learn to trust each other. This isn't a love story, it is merely a story about survival.
What certain things would you like me to focus on: overall plot, I am not a native speaker, so please bare with me, when it comes to mistakes.
Why do you think your review is necessary: I used to post a story here ages ago and it was successful enough, but due to hate on another site I walked away, willing to never look back. The thing about writing is though, that I need it, so I am doing a fresh start and I just want some reassurance, that coming back was the right decision.
PS: I won't be mad, if you decide to walk away from this story, dystopian can be quite challenging and is not always your enjoyable light-hearted read.
Story Name: Brontide
Link: http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/71030/Brontide/
Short Summary: Brontide drags you into a dystopian future (or rather present), where society has changed badly. Inspired by the "The purge" concept, the story portraits the life's of a few teenagers during the annual week-long cleansing, and the weeks before that.
Some are blinded by the ideology, others have seen too much and all of them have to learn to trust each other. This isn't a love story, it is merely a story about survival.
What certain things would you like me to focus on: overall plot, I am not a native speaker, so please bare with me, when it comes to mistakes.
Why do you think your review is necessary: I used to post a story here ages ago and it was successful enough, but due to hate on another site I walked away, willing to never look back. The thing about writing is though, that I need it, so I am doing a fresh start and I just want some reassurance, that coming back was the right decision.
PS: I won't be mad, if you decide to walk away from this story, dystopian can be quite challenging and is not always your enjoyable light-hearted read.
Names: Emily and Haley
Story Name: Punk Meets Perfect
Link: http://www.5secondsofsummerfanfiction.com/Story/70479/Punk-Meets-Perfect/
Short Summary: Anastasia is the good girl with perfect grades and Michael is the punk in school. Michael gets in a fight and Anastasia intervenes. They both get a referral and Ana has to tutor Michael as well. What will happen? Will she push him away or fall in love?
Just focus on the story in particular
Why I Think It's Necessary: Just wondering if our story is a decent story and what you think of it.....
Thanks!
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@lukes bae
I'll get started on your review as soon as I can, dear. :)
4/22/15