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Review: Picture Perfect

My first review! Who's excited?

Okay, so this review is on Picture Prefect by kkgal14.

Lets start! (Finally)

So, your story. I didn't have enough time to read it all (or even most of it!) But, from what I've read (which was until chapter 4-5) I can tell you this...
*Its really good
*Well told
*No spelling mistakes or any thing like that
*You're a great writer

You have nice phrases and its really well written. I think all of the views you've gained are well deserved as its a really good story and I can't wait to read the rest.

Yay, you got another fan!

The result: Probably... 9/10 Keep it up, because I mean it when I say its great!

Ps, The cover photo is great but maybe you could get better pictures for your characters?

Notes

The Beast At Midnight coming soon! xx ;)

Comments

@kkgal14
Thanks. ;) I would love to do the review. It will be up as soon as i get it done :)

DarlingKK_123 DarlingKK_123
1/27/15

Could you review my story Ink? I loved the underused chapter. You make some valid arguments my friend xx.

kkgal14 kkgal14
1/27/15

Omg I totally agree. I will check your story out. What really pisses me off is I've used many of these ideas that have not been noticed. I had this one story called Desiree, which is about this girl who is madly obsessed with Harry, and does all of these wicked things to be with him. She's the criminal/psycho lol! I also did a story once where the girl was the player, and Harry's the new kid. So, almost every boy in the high school worships over this girl, even the girls at the school suck up to her, which gives this girl a big head. But the thing is, Harry sees nothing great about her, while she's crushing on him. She asks him out several times, doing all kinds of things to get him to like her back, but gets rejected by him over and over again, which she's not used to happening. At the end, what's supposed to happen is the girl finally sees why Harry doesn't like her; because she treats everyone terribly and believes popularity is everything. Slowly, gradually she begins to change her ways on her own, and Harry likes who she's become. It was a decent story line in my opinion, but no one was interested in reading it back then. I could tell you so many of my story ideas that I have. There's many that are different from what's on this site.

I'm interested in the underused chapter coming up. I'm alway looking for tips. :)

xRockMex xRockMex
1/26/15

I'm over the whole Darcy thing! It drives me crazy when in a fan fiction the main character and Harry end up naming their baby girl Darcy. My friend told me she read a Niall fan fic where his little girls name was Darcy. Wtf??