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In a Heartbeat

Panic


Harry's POV

I walked into the kitchen to check on her and ended up eavesdropping.
"Mom, Dad's working. Heather's going to get out of school in a few hours. She can come pick me up," she said.
Wait, what? I thought.
"Okay. Don't worry, Mom. I'm going to be fine. I know how to take care of myself. And if I'm not okay, I have my skates. They're sharp. And they hurt," she said.
What is she talking about? I thought, moving closer.
"I love you, too, Mom. Bye."
She pressed a button on her phone and turned around. She shrieked and took a step back, tripping over her bag. She smiled and opened her mouth as if to laugh, but nothing came out. I took a step closer and watched as her facial expression turned to panic. I stood there, not knowing what to do.


Melody's POV

I started to panic. I gasped for breath, but my lungs wouldn't work. Harry stood beside me with a shocked expression on his face.
DO SOMETHING!!!! I mentally screamed at him. GET SOMEBODY!!!! I CAN'T BREATHE!!!!
Suddenly, I could breathe again. I gasped for air, filling my lungs over and over again with precious oxygen. I sat up and started crying/laughing. A very confused Harry squatted down next to me, looking at me funny.
"Umm..." he said, not sure what to do. "Are you okay?"
I shook my head, then nodded, which made him even more confused. He awkwardly patted my back.
Suddenly, a herd of elephants came running into the kitchen.
"What happened?" three British voices shouted in unison, followed by a muffled Irish "What'd you do to her?"
I curled up into the fetal position and put my head between my knees.
"I didn't do anything!" Harry said from beside me. I felt another hand on my back, this time from the other side.
"I forgive you for taking my bacon," whispered Niall. I looked up and laughed, tears running down my cheeks.
"That was my bacon!" I shouted, wiping the tears from my face. "Is there Kleenex somewhere?"

Notes

Okay, so I may not be as bad at writing from Harry's POV as I thought. Maybe. Comment and tell me if you want to see more of Harry's POV. Or... tell me if I'm okay at it or not. 'Cuz I'm not sure.

Comments

HEY. Your official-unofficial announcements sadden me. No promises or not, I really, really, really, really, really, really, REALLY hope you decide to eventually continue. I won't even be mad if you do a rewrite but dude, you gotta do something. I WILL DIE IF THIS STORY DOES NOT CONTINUE.

@fascinated

It didn't sound aggressive. I'd be pissed at me, too. I found my charger, but my phone refuses to copy and paste what I've written, which was what my original plan was to do after realizing that it wasn't written in my notebook. I haven't had time to type it all up yet, but I figure that since I have nothing else to do right now (other than watch "Supernatural" and sleep), I should probably update. I've been working on chapter ideas for the sequel, typing them on my phone as they come to me and such, thinking of ways to lead up to them. I'll admit, I suck at it. But I'm working on it! I have a secret partner in crime that's going to help with it. Hopefully.
So I'm gonna quit rambling now and actually go type the chapter.

iceskatez iceskatez
6/7/14

ThAT WAS FOURTEEN DAYS AGO!!!!!!!!!! Where is your charger? I didn't mean for that to sound aggressive.

@fascinated

To be honest, I already have the name picked out (don't laugh at me if I already said that in the sequel announcement chapter), but that's really good. I might use that for another story I'm working on.
I'm really excited for the sequel because it's going to be kind of like a fresh start, and I have a lot of ideas that I'm super duper excited to use. There's definitely going to be a lot more drama in the sequel and I'm hoping that I might make you guys cry at least once. :)
Your tears bring me great joy.
xD

iceskatez iceskatez
3/16/14

I seriously cannot wait for the sequel :) And for a name, maybe Don't Believe All You See, but that may be a bit long. Hope you update again soon!!!