In a Heartbeat - Comments

HEY. Your official-unofficial announcements sadden me. No promises or not, I really, really, really, really, really, really, REALLY hope you decide to eventually continue. I won't even be mad if you do a rewrite but dude, you gotta do something. I WILL DIE IF THIS STORY DOES NOT CONTINUE.

@fascinated

It didn't sound aggressive. I'd be pissed at me, too. I found my charger, but my phone refuses to copy and paste what I've written, which was what my original plan was to do after realizing that it wasn't written in my notebook. I haven't had time to type it all up yet, but I figure that since I have nothing else to do right now (other than watch "Supernatural" and sleep), I should probably update. I've been working on chapter ideas for the sequel, typing them on my phone as they come to me and such, thinking of ways to lead up to them. I'll admit, I suck at it. But I'm working on it! I have a secret partner in crime that's going to help with it. Hopefully.
So I'm gonna quit rambling now and actually go type the chapter.

ThAT WAS FOURTEEN DAYS AGO!!!!!!!!!! Where is your charger? I didn't mean for that to sound aggressive.

@fascinated

To be honest, I already have the name picked out (don't laugh at me if I already said that in the sequel announcement chapter), but that's really good. I might use that for another story I'm working on.
I'm really excited for the sequel because it's going to be kind of like a fresh start, and I have a lot of ideas that I'm super duper excited to use. There's definitely going to be a lot more drama in the sequel and I'm hoping that I might make you guys cry at least once. :)
Your tears bring me great joy.
xD

I seriously cannot wait for the sequel :) And for a name, maybe Don't Believe All You See, but that may be a bit long. Hope you update again soon!!!

@iceskatez
Btw I was joking about being mad about the picture. I was only saying it to get a rise out of you and yes I did tell you I didn't wan't my picture on here but what ever it doesn't matter.

@Kayla Marie

I have three other friends. One of them I'm having issues with, too (she's the person I based Katrina Varno off of) and the friend that I exchanged those texts with (the person I based Katrina Carr off of) doesn't want "Kat" to know. My other friend wouldn't understand why I feel like nobody's there for me because she's always there for me but I don't really like sharing my drama with her because she doesn't share her drama with me. She's more of my fun, bubbly friend that I'm always me around. Sans drama. And my other friend I am talking to. She's on this website and I've been messaging her since forever so we've gotten pretty close and I know she won't judge me for starting the fight. She already told me that I'm in the wrong, too and it's not just Katrina. So my online friend is there for me and I've been talking to her about it because she's not biased about it. Now if you would like to continue this conversation, I would appreciate it if you stuck it in my messages instead of In my comments section. Thank you!

@iceskatez
Okay. Honestly I think you should talk to other friends and see what they think and see if they can help you. Believe it or not there is always someone there for you.

You really shouldn't put personal texts on their especially when you're fighting with them. It is actually really rude and shows that you are not a trustworthy person. I know I don't know you personally but I think you should talk to your friend in person and try to work it out with them.

@Kayla Marie

But I put it in my story, so now it becomes fanfiction. Trust me, this is all tying into a part of the sequel I had no idea would even be connected to it until now. So that chapter wasn't just getting her attention. It's now a part of the story. A very important part of the story.
And from my point of view, it's actually lessening the amount of drama. Not sure what my friend thinks about drama levels, but that's what I see. And as I said before, I obviously couldn't get her attention in any other way. I've done everything except suicide, and I'm not planning on using that card.

@iceskatez
I see your point but this is not the way to get your friend's attention. This website is for fan fiction and not drama.

@fascinated
I seriously have no idea how to respond to that but I felt the need to reply anyway.
So here's that reply I was talking about. :)

@Kayla Marie

The thing is that the person that this fight was with never acted on what I said to her before. I know she reads this and yes, the texts were real (most of them and a few I changed to accommodate the story better because I would've confused y'all with these people you don't know), and I did consider just making up a fight, but I couldn't. She says she needs time before we can talk about it but I couldn't. I would've loved to have time to think about it before we talked, but I couldn't because I needed to focus on hockey. State was this weekend (championships are today, actually), and I couldn't have all this stress and drama right before the most important tournament all season. And I figured that since she reads this, I'd put it in the story with what I thought after almost every text I received, because all the other times I've tried talking to her about it she hasn't taken it to heart. She keeps making excuses to not be a good friend, though. That she's going through her own drama. She should be used to it. I, however, am not, so it's really stressful for me. I seriously considered suicide. Or parasuicide, because then I'd see if she'd come visit me in the hospital or make excuses as to why she didn't, because if I was really as important to her as she keeps saying I am, she'd WALK to the hospital even if it mean she'd be grounded for the rest of her life for disobeying her mother.
And I realize that we probably have different opinions on what a friend is supposed to be, but for me a friend is someone who will drop everything to support you and can trust you with anything and vice versa. Someone who won't tell your secrets even if your friendship had a horrible ending.
Someone who is your light when you're lost in the dark.
But that's just me.

I think if this is a real fight between you and someone else (in chapter 68) maybe you should talk to someone about it and not put it online.

By the way those texts went (and I gather they were real), I think that friendship is dancing in the edge, but I do hope you won't be lonely, because I know how terrible it feels.
And if you feel that a friend doesn't care, you have the right to say. We choose who our friends are, and if someone is t being a good friend to you, then you can say something about it. And I think this is a god idea, because sometimes I find its easier to talk to people when your not looking at them.
I like the way you've been putting your real life drama's into writing as well :)

@Katrina Angel Carr

Well nobody would've known it was actually YOU until you said it. And you never said a word about not wanting your picture on here. And those exclamation points should be question marks, because that's a question, not an exclamatory sentence. And you shouldn't have an E after the word "mad". That's a little word that preschoolers knows how to spell. And don't give me that crap about your learning disability. That's no excuse for a misspelled baby word.

btw i'm made now. WHY THE HELL WOULD YOU PUT A PICTURE OF ME ON HERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'VE TOLD YOU BE FOR I DIDN'TIT ON HERE!>:-/ But please update when you can. :-)

Please dont stop writing i love this!!! If you do write a sequl please tell the people who actually reas this and post it on the site please!!

Please continue writing! This is my all time favorite fanfiction and i would be so sad if you deleted it. :( please dont delete it!! And I think it would be cool if melony got stay tattooed on her left wrist and strong on her right. ;) but please dont delete in a heartbeat

Please continue writing! This is my all time favorite fanfiction and i would be so sad if you deleted it. :( please dont delete it!! And I think it would be cool if melony got stay tartoed on her left wrist and strong on her right. ;) but please dont delete in a heartbeat