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In a Heartbeat

Explanation

Harry's POV

"So," she said, swallowing her bacon. "Where the hell am I and why am I with you guys?"
I cringed at her choice of language.
"The Ramada Plaza and Suites. And Harry can explain the rest," Liam said, looking at me.
"Erm, you slipped on ice and fell. I tried to catch you but I fell, too," I said, suddenly very fascinated by my shoes. "You hit your head and I went into the store and asked for a shopping cart. I put you in that and brought you here."
"Wait..." she said, twisting around, looking for something. "Where's my bag?"
"The purple one?" I asked, confused. "It's by the door. Why?"
She jumped over the back of the couch without standing up and ran for the door.
"Impressive," Zayn said, staring after her. He turned to face me. "I need to learn how to do that."
Niall just nodded in agreement, picking up the bacon she dropped.
"Well," I said to nobody in particular, smiling. "I don't think she needs a hospital."

Notes

Yeah... I don't really like writing from Harry's POV. It's weird. I may or may not do that again. So that's why it's so short.

Comments

HEY. Your official-unofficial announcements sadden me. No promises or not, I really, really, really, really, really, really, REALLY hope you decide to eventually continue. I won't even be mad if you do a rewrite but dude, you gotta do something. I WILL DIE IF THIS STORY DOES NOT CONTINUE.

@fascinated

It didn't sound aggressive. I'd be pissed at me, too. I found my charger, but my phone refuses to copy and paste what I've written, which was what my original plan was to do after realizing that it wasn't written in my notebook. I haven't had time to type it all up yet, but I figure that since I have nothing else to do right now (other than watch "Supernatural" and sleep), I should probably update. I've been working on chapter ideas for the sequel, typing them on my phone as they come to me and such, thinking of ways to lead up to them. I'll admit, I suck at it. But I'm working on it! I have a secret partner in crime that's going to help with it. Hopefully.
So I'm gonna quit rambling now and actually go type the chapter.

iceskatez iceskatez
6/7/14

ThAT WAS FOURTEEN DAYS AGO!!!!!!!!!! Where is your charger? I didn't mean for that to sound aggressive.

@fascinated

To be honest, I already have the name picked out (don't laugh at me if I already said that in the sequel announcement chapter), but that's really good. I might use that for another story I'm working on.
I'm really excited for the sequel because it's going to be kind of like a fresh start, and I have a lot of ideas that I'm super duper excited to use. There's definitely going to be a lot more drama in the sequel and I'm hoping that I might make you guys cry at least once. :)
Your tears bring me great joy.
xD

iceskatez iceskatez
3/16/14

I seriously cannot wait for the sequel :) And for a name, maybe Don't Believe All You See, but that may be a bit long. Hope you update again soon!!!