Cardio
The Greatest Emotion
Savannah's POV:
I heard the car engine start and seconds later I heard the car drive away. I opened my eyes and sat up on the couch. The credits were still going from the movie. A teardrop fell out from my right eye and trickled down my cheek. 'Sweetie your awake' Mum came in the lounge and walked towards me. 'Harry just left- hey, hey what's wrong' she quickly sat next to me and wiped my tears. 'Did he do something wrong? Did you have a fight?' she rubbed my arm.
'I heard him' my voice cracked as tears emerged from both my eyes.
'Harry was talking to me and he thought I was asleep, but I heard him' I kept my head down and sobbed. 'What did he say?' she wiped my tears away.
'Mum, he told me that he was falling for me' I looked up to her eyes. 'And that he...he loves me' I cried. Mum wrapped her arms around me and took me in for a hug. 'I don't know what to do' I mumbled as I leaned my head on her chest. 'Maybe not now, but in time you will' she rubbed her hand on my arm. 'I know that your an expert when it comes to the heart' Mum spoke. 'You can prevent diseases from reoccurring, stop vessels from leaking and remove tumours' she pulled away from the hug to look at me . 'But you can't stop what the heart wants to feel' she gave me a lip smile.
'You should know that this is the greatest emotion' she pointed at chest. 'Love' she smiled.
The song 'It's gonna be love' started to play as the credits continued.
It’s gonna be Love
It’s gonna be great
It’s gonna be more then I can take
It’s gonna be free
It’s gonna be real
It’s gonna change everything I feel
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Okay, I know it's been a long time since you've written this story but is definitely amazing. I love how Savannah is educated and sophisticated. The story has a nice flow to it, it makes sense and is well written! I have also read your other stories and they are also excellent. I think you should continue writing or start a new story because you're really good! <3
3/21/15