Cardio - Comments

Okay, I know it's been a long time since you've written this story but is definitely amazing. I love how Savannah is educated and sophisticated. The story has a nice flow to it, it makes sense and is well written! I have also read your other stories and they are also excellent. I think you should continue writing or start a new story because you're really good! <3

I hope you choose to update this story!! It's my favorite one of yours!!! I love how Savannah is an educated, sophisticated woman who already has her life in order. The girls in these stories usually aren't even close to her intellectually and I really enjoy it!!

Hey! So far I've only read 8 chapters (Sanctuary was the last) but I have to comment. Greys anatomy is my all time favourite tv show. This is a really creative and amazing story! Your such a talented writer.

Ps. What made me comment was the little speech sav gave about the hospital being her home, the one meridith said in the season 6 finale.

@princess.sparkle i loved it just as much as i love you others lol

@hazzaismylover I really wished I could! But I'm putting all my effort on my sequel at the moment, hopefully once I feel comfortable with how that is going, I can get some time to continue this :)

you need to update or i will die ....

@Nina_Styles @Khloe Styles Thanks girls! But I'm having a writers block or more like lack of motivation with this story. But hopefully I do get back on writing it :)

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Please update soon! I love this story so much <3

Please please please! Update as soon as you can. This is just a perfect story!

Please please please! Update as soon as you can. This is just a perfect story!

This is amaZAYN can you please please please update and make me happy? I am on love with this story and it is just great xx

@Maddie Hi Maddie thanks for the comment :) I mentioned beforehand that I'm going to b taking a break from this story...I'm currently working on wrapping up my other story, if ur following that.

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please please please update soon i love this story sooooo much and ur such an amazing writer!!!!!

please please please update soon i love this story sooooo much and ur such an amazing writer!!!!!

@MrsStyles555 Hi yes I am a fan. And I mentioned to someone b4 that some of the scenes are based on snippets of the show but at the same time I am trying to in corporate some originality into it.

Hmm.... Are you a Greys Anatomy Fan by any chance?? I know ur a Pre-Med student and all, but some of the characters and other parts of the story seem similar! I am a huge fan of ur stories!!! But even if you take a break from Cardio and update Hanging by a Moment, I will still happy!!!! Keep writing!! I can't wait to see what happens next!!! ;)

@kyci Hi, I hope you do like it :) Its my favourite out of all my stories, I just wish I have more time to continue it! I've done work experience at hospitals...but the main reason I know about this things is because Im currently doing Pre-Med in College. So I'm learning and applying some of it on my writing :) But I did inform everyone in the beginning that bcos Im still learning not everything I write about will be 100% correct. Like eg. on ch 45, I dnt want ppl to do the procedure I wrote... the take home msg is just call the Ambulance if ever in an emergency!

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@Rebekitah hahahah yeah I like that film as well & also we learnt about the codition in Uni so I decided to apply it, bcos it made more sense now! :)

@Katilynn Hi, yeah i won't stop but I am going to take a break :) Thanks for the comment tho, it really helps me know wheather ppl are still interested in this story...

Just like heaven reference ! I love that movie :D