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Dont look Away

chap 7 cont.

Everything was going perfectly. Until Erin started acting strangely. I didn't see him as often. Only yesterday, he took off to who knows where. When I talked to him about it, the look on his face was priceless. As in, no one would buy it. I was so confused but then I saw something that rocked my world. But it was solo not in a good way. ★★★★★ I was making my way home after practice when I decided to go and see Erin. Rounding the corner of a grease slicked wall, I caught sight of a group of teenagers. Not knowing that I was in trouble, I walked up and saw a man holding a gun. I ducked behind a dumpster and watched as my best friend in the whole world dragged a pit bull through a door in the wall. The howls of so many tortured beasts permeated the air. But the torture in my own heart caused by Erin screamed louder inside my mind.

Comments

Ok, I have had one comment and a few new rates. Of course the 1D crew are on their way as we speak. In maybe the next 3 or 4 chapters. But as soon as they hit the field, things are gonna kick up a notch! So, if you would, subscribe, rate, AND COMMENT. I would to hear from y'all!
AngelWings AngelWings
1/13/13
Plz continue
IluvHazza IluvHazza
1/10/13
Hey everybody! So I'm just wondering what you all think of the story. So if you would please comment and rate. I feel like it is getting wishy washy and is losing focus too quickly. I would much rather have all your opinions on what you think then start worrying about it.
AngelWings AngelWings
1/10/13
Ok. Well. I decided I need something to spice things up a bit. Maybe it looks like I skipped a little forward but she had to go the school.
AngelWings AngelWings
1/9/13
Plz continue and update
IluvHazza IluvHazza
1/8/13