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Dont look Away - Comments
Hey everybody! So I'm just wondering what you all think of the story. So if you would please comment and rate. I feel like it is getting wishy washy and is losing focus too quickly. I would much rather have all your opinions on what you think then start worrying about it.
Ok. Well. I decided I need something to spice things up a bit. Maybe it looks like I skipped a little forward but she had to go the school.
Sorry about the shortness of the chapter. And I really need to figure out why it wont do paragraphs! Ugh!
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