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The Angel Wears Black

(4) Your story lines are unique, but there’s still a lot of excessive dialogue. It’s all great, but a few more details won’t hurt you.

If you found this review to be disappointing, I'm can't say I'm sorry. As I said, I am a brutally honest person, or so people tell me. If you would like me to take this down, I will, just ask me. Don't bitch about it either; I don't care what you think, I'm just telling you what I think. Don't get mad, you asked for it. Don't rate this badly just because you don't like what I say. But on the off chance you like what I'm telling you, I'm glad you could learn something from me.

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@That_clifford_girl

Hi! I don't normally do this but I'm just gonna get right on it.

It's in my knowledge that this author isn't coming back. Which means your review isn't coming. But! I recently started up a review store so if you're interested you can link your story there.

All you have to do is click my name and follow the form. :-)

InValid @ 5SecondsOfSummerFanfiction.com
12/31/16

@InsomniaCam

Hi! I don't normally do this but I'm just gonna get right on it.

It's in my knowledge that this author isn't coming back. Which means your review isn't coming. But! I recently started up a review store so if you're interested you can link your story there.

All you have to do is click my name and follow the form. :-)

InValid @ 5SecondsOfSummerFanfiction.com
12/31/16

@Steffi_Hemmings00

Hi! I don't normally do this but I'm just gonna get right on it.

It's in my knowledge that this author isn't coming back. Which means your review isn't coming. But! I recently started up a review store so if you're interested you can link your story there.

All you have to do is click my name and follow the form. :-)

InValid @ 5SecondsOfSummerFanfiction.com
12/31/16

@BEEbeautiful

Hi! I don't usually do this but I'm just gonna get right on it.

It's in my knowledge that thus author isn't coming back. Which means your revuew isn't coming. But! I recently started a review store so if you're interested you can link your story there.

All you have to do is click my name and follow the form.

InValid @ 5SecondsOfSummerFanfiction.com
12/31/16

@ItsKirstyCaniff

Hi! I don't nomally do this but I'm just gonna get right on it.

It's in my knowledge tht this authr isn't coming back. Which means your review isn't coming. But! I recently started up a review store so if you're interested you can link your story there.

All you have to do is click my name and follow the form. :-)

InValid @ 5SecondsOfSummerFanfiction.com
12/31/16

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