Fanfiction 101
Dare To Love
(8) Finally! Someone who understands realistic! Struggling to pay rent – realistic! Looking for a job – realistic! Cockroaches in an apartment (I think it’s an apartment) kitchen – definitely realistic.
I’m enjoying your realisticness, but I can’t really say that I like or don’t like your story because there just aren’t enough chapters to tell. Nothing has really happened yet, but I have a feeling that once you get into the story more, it will be great.
What I don’t like is that you keep your sneak peeks up. Once you post the chapter, there’s really no need for them anymore, so you should take them down as the actual chapters go up.
Overall, I think you have the start of something great going on, and I’ll probably continue reading just to see where your story is heading.
If you found this review to be disappointing, I'm can't say I'm sorry. As I said, I am a brutally honest person, or so people tell me. If you would like me to take this down, I will, just ask me. Don't bitch about it either; I don't care what you think, I'm just telling you what I think. Don't get mad, you asked for it. Don't rate this badly just because you don't like what I say. But on the off chance you like what I'm telling you, I'm glad you could learn something from me.
@That_clifford_girl
Hi! I don't normally do this but I'm just gonna get right on it.
It's in my knowledge that this author isn't coming back. Which means your review isn't coming. But! I recently started up a review store so if you're interested you can link your story there.
All you have to do is click my name and follow the form. :-)
12/31/16