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Plunge
Plunge
Author: A girl with a dream
Rate: 9
Your grammar is great, and you have a really good dialogue to detail ratio. Usually I have more to say, but you have seriously good grammar and all. That’s what I hate about great stories – I never know what to say other than it’s honestly amazing!
As you might already tell, I love your story. It’s new and fresh, nothing like anything I’ve ever read before. I like that she doesn’t just soften up to Harry after he saves her – you’re consistent, and I like that. The only reason I’m not giving you a ten is because of basically the most used plotline in this fandom – he spilled coffee on her and that’s how they meet. Sometimes I get to say you’ve used something completely mainstream but made it your own, but you just threw something mainstream in there as it is and it’s getting old.
Overall, though, I really enjoy reading the rest of your story. You may have one mainstream idea, but the rest is all really good. Seeing as I’ve hit subscribe to the story and can’t wait to read more, I would totally recommend Plunge to anyone looking for a good read.
If you find your review to be disappointing, I cannot honestly tell you that I’m sorry. Do not let what I say in any way discourage you from writing or anything for that matter. I am just one person with strongly opinionated views on everything. If I made it clear that I strongly dislike your story, do not think that other people won’t enjoy it. There are many other readers with different views than me who will find interest in your story where I may not have. I hope you do take something out of this and improve on and continue your writing, but if you don’t, that’s fine too.
Author: A girl with a dream
Rate: 9
Your grammar is great, and you have a really good dialogue to detail ratio. Usually I have more to say, but you have seriously good grammar and all. That’s what I hate about great stories – I never know what to say other than it’s honestly amazing!
As you might already tell, I love your story. It’s new and fresh, nothing like anything I’ve ever read before. I like that she doesn’t just soften up to Harry after he saves her – you’re consistent, and I like that. The only reason I’m not giving you a ten is because of basically the most used plotline in this fandom – he spilled coffee on her and that’s how they meet. Sometimes I get to say you’ve used something completely mainstream but made it your own, but you just threw something mainstream in there as it is and it’s getting old.
Overall, though, I really enjoy reading the rest of your story. You may have one mainstream idea, but the rest is all really good. Seeing as I’ve hit subscribe to the story and can’t wait to read more, I would totally recommend Plunge to anyone looking for a good read.
If you find your review to be disappointing, I cannot honestly tell you that I’m sorry. Do not let what I say in any way discourage you from writing or anything for that matter. I am just one person with strongly opinionated views on everything. If I made it clear that I strongly dislike your story, do not think that other people won’t enjoy it. There are many other readers with different views than me who will find interest in your story where I may not have. I hope you do take something out of this and improve on and continue your writing, but if you don’t, that’s fine too.
@That_clifford_girl
Hi! I don't normally do this but I'm just gonna get right on it.
It's in my knowledge that this author isn't coming back. Which means your review isn't coming. But! I recently started up a review store so if you're interested you can link your story there.
All you have to do is click my name and follow the form. :-)
12/31/16