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punk romeo and dark Juliet

chapter 6

Harry's Pov
I cant believe Zayn wants me to take somebody life.. I know i'm violent but i don't have the guts to kill someone!.. well, not on purpose. But the worst part, it's a girl!
"HARRY HELP ME OUT HERE!!!"
"AHHHH HELP M-" Zayn quickly tapped her mouth
" SHUT UP!"
he slapped her, Perrie came in behind him.. why would she help him do something so terrible!!!

Autumn's pov
I walk to my door and walk inside and as usual wave Cecilia bye as she drives away.
I walk into my mom's room. " mom did you pick jade and crizzy from school?"
"No, I thought you pick them up!!!"
my mother had a worried look on her face.. it striked fear into my heart.. where could they be!!!!
I feel my eyes get puffy and i start getting light headed.. the room around suddenly got really blurry and i feel a cold tear run across my face. 'this couldn't be happening.. i can't lose them' i felt another cold tear roll down my cheek i started breathing heavily. I look over at my mom she was also crying... that's when the sadness left and i filled with complete anger.. I got off and started throwing everything off my desk and shelves. I walk up to my mom and lay next to her..
"p-please g-get my babies back".. she chocked out.. " don't worry mom, i'll get them back and i'n coming back until i do" i whispered to her, I kissed her head, gathered everything i needed and headed down the road.

Danielle's house..

I quickly walked up to Danny's front door and knocked really hard.. It took her awhile she swung open her door with a gun pointed at my head " what the f-.. OMG AUTUMN! what are you doing here, it's 3:00 in the morning" she said as she placed her gun ion her shelve while inviting me in. She shut the door behind me and we sat on the couch.
" what's wrong?! what happen!" she said with concern.
" someone stole Jade and crizzy.. I think I know who, so I came to ask you..Where is the Sotuh gang?" i began to cry again.
"I do-"
" TELL ME!!!" I shouted quickly cutting her off.

Notes

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