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punk romeo and dark Juliet

chapter 7

Autumn's pov
"he lives in a deserted hotel. but don't think going after him... he took your sisters for a reason, not to hurt them, but to hurt you!" Danny was trying to explain why I shouldn't go but I wasn't paying attention. I was thinking of what Zayn might do to them.. i was concerned of their safty. " what he kills them" i whispered.. the thought went through my head, i got a knot in my through; I swollowed it because i didn't want to cry any more, I was tired of crying... it was time for action!
I jumped up from my place on the couch and stared down the street. Danny didn't chase me because she knew I wouldn't stop till my sisters were safe.

Harry' pov

I was walking to my favorite bar so i could get my mind off of things. I then heard a girl crying as she sped my direction. When she got closer i noticed her face.. it was the girl who showed me to watch what i say around her. She saw me and ran up to me.. she didn't look like she would hurt anybody.
"please give them back," she cried to me with despration in her eyes "don't hurt them.. they didn't do anything, let them go, please take me instead!" her eyes began to water. I wanted to hug her, to comfort her.
I then said something.. i don't know why but it slipped.
" it's ok.." i put my arms around her " I will try"... what am I doing!?she looked at me surpised.. her beautiful eyes softened as she look at me.. I used my thumbs to wipe the tears off her face " I will get them back for you".. What am I doing! Zayns gonna kill me...

Notes

Do you think harry has a soft spot for autumn?

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