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Philophobia

Chapter Seventeen

(Heyo, remember to read the note after this chapter)






My eyes now glued to the threatening writing, appearing to look as if it were blood. My words hitting the bottom of my stomach, along with my throat.

'FOUND YOU' dripped to the point of dry across the only wall that managed to keep it's uphold. My only instinct was to walk closer, to examine the thick liquid. My brain trying to convince me it was just my imagination, toying with my grasp on what was real, and what wasn't.

"What are you doing?" His voice boomed from behind, realizing I'd forgotten his presence.

My heel quickly planting to the floor, as I turned to meet his intense gaze. He hadn't looked angry, frightened, mad, or even confused. He was simply neutral.

"It's blood, obviously. What more proof do you need than you're eyes?" His voice now echoing throughout the empty walls.

"You're going to argue with me on this, seriously?" My scoff only becoming more vocal.

"I think I'd rather discuss what the real matter is here, like how you're stupid actions got us here." His tone made me felt as if I were under question in court. Arguing with the lawyer as he presented his case, which I strongly disagreed with. The way he emphasized 'us' made my blood only boil.

"My actions got you here?" I corrected quickly. "You made me stay the night, as I was only wandering around for a late night walk -" "-you were lost!-" "you're full of yourself, I was not-" "admit it, Jamie. This is your fault!" He again boomed, which I then noticed how close our proximity had come. His breath now pressing against the skin on my forehead.

"So it's my fault, even though I'm positive you know who this is! Because whatever mess you got yourself into, you've decided to run. Which obviously, they found you. Not me, you!" My breathing was now erratic along with my adrenalin.

"You told me you were being watched," he states now much calmer. Being the one to control his anger, he leaned forward in a whisper. "You told me that there was people you've encountered, and they mysteriously just go missing. Admit it, Jaybird, you're being watched too." His lips carefully whispered against my ear, enough for me to just hear. As if I were to break if he were any further.

"Why are you bringing me into this?" My tone softened along with his. My eyes flickering up to meet his green, expecting his famous smirk, but was replaced with a serious frown of thought.

"I didn't, they did."

Notes

Apologies, it is short. But I just wanted to push in there the dramatic argument after. Because last chapter was already long.. Like it took me awhile to write! But, I might be able to update again today, there isn't a promise, just hope!
Also, I'll be able to describe more of the story as it goes on. But now the major plot has come into detail, I just really wanted to take my time with the story. So now that the plot is out there, it should get more interesting!

Thanks for reading! <3
Remember to comment, rate, subscribe, :)
-C xoxo

Comments

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Carissa Carissa
3/24/14

Please update!

Carrotlover Carrotlover
3/16/14

Well that's what make your story even more interesting: in your notes, you just put all your thoughts on there, and it's really, but really cool and interesting!
Hey, being dork is not only negative. It's someone who can be themselves and doesn't care if people judge. Seriously, your ''dorkiness'' isn't a bad thing! :)
I hope for you that one of your ambition will come true. If you take the path of writing, well I'm telling, plus all your readers: you can make it.
Even though this is a fic, I don't feel like it's one. I feel like I'm reading a book, but on the internet. I'm not feeling it's Harry Styles from One Direction (Well, I think you never wrote Styles, so maybe I'm wrong thinking it's Harry Styles, but ANYWAY.). I feel it's just another character from your head. My point is: your story could be found on a shelf at the library store. So, if you finished your story (not that I'm septic, no no! I know you can finish it! :) ), I suggested you to send it to a publishing house! :D
I'm glad to know I made you smile :) Don't give up on your writing and delete everything. See how much people love your work? See how much we enjoy reading it? Don't worry, you have a beautiful writing. Yeah... I get frustrated me too when I wrote my story. I'm a french Canadian, and it's sometimes tricky to express, for example, a situation or an emotion in english. But this site helps me, so I'll continue :)
Have a gooooood morning/afternoon/evening/night or whatever time it is where you live xD

marie.eve07 marie.eve07
1/9/14

@marie.eve07
I read your comment, and couldn't stop smiling! Personally, I write on this site as practice. My future ambition being between writing and visual arts. Though, I'm glad you like my story! So many times I've thought about deleting this, and just quitting. But I don't want to do that to my readers! I have never found a love for my own writing, so I just get frustrated after awhile.
Plus, when you commented on my notes, I literally just read back through all of them and realized how big of a dork I sound!!! Hahaha

Canadianeeh Canadianeeh
1/8/14

I really love your work. The choice of words, the main plot, how you express everything... It''s just, wow! I felt like it was really happening, that Jamie, Hunter and Harry were really living (okay, we all know Harry is living on this Earth for real but you know what I mean. Well, I hope xD anyway) keep up writing. If writing wasn't in your choice of career, think about twice; I'm not just saying this to be sweet with you. No, I believe you're an exquisite writer and your imagination will never stop growing. You'll go far in life with only a pen and paper.
I really love reading your notes too. They're twisted up with wisdom words and hilarious sentences!
Okay... This comment is pretty long, maybe I should've sent it in messages.... Hahahaha xD

marie.eve07 marie.eve07
1/8/14