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The Slut

Chapter 34

CHRIS's POV

I jump at the sound of the judge's hammer thingy slamming against his stand.

Sky steps off from the stand and her lawyer asks me to step up to stand. I take my oath and get comfortable.

She starts asking me questions about where I was and if i had feelings for Sky. Truth is she's hot but do i have "feelings" for her? No. But i would never hurt her either. I honestly just want to be friends with her.

"Did you rape my Sky Edwards?" He asks pointing to Sky.

"No, i did not rape her!" I yell.

"That's not what you told her," He says.

"What?!" I say more calmly.

"You told my client, when she woke up from being drugged by you, that you two had sex. She was out cold, she didnt want the sex."

"I told her that to scare her! I wanted her to be scared of me! I never raped her, we never had sex... Ever. Not even while we were dating! I told her we had sex so she wouldn't under estimate me. I wanted a simple conversation from her!" I yell.

"Did you drug and kidnap her?" He asks.

I look at my lawyer. And then at Sky.

"Yes."

"No further questions," he says.

Comments

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You certainly are creative with your sex scenes aren't you? Word of advice, it usually doesn't happen that fast. Good job though. Your stories really keep me on my toes.

@Harrys_wife1114
The guy they put for Chris is from an unpopular polish film that I love

MysteryWriter MysteryWriter
5/5/14

@MysteryWriter

What do you mean?

Hey it's Dominik as Chris! <3

MysteryWriter MysteryWriter
4/23/14