The Slut - Comments

I've never been a fan of fanfiction myself, however, I was quite curious as to what fans write about their beloved boy band. I have to admit I find some of these stories to be amusing. I am a writer. It almost inspires me to write a fanfic. Then, I realize how much of a waste of time it is. That is for me. For you however, I believe you have a talent. I have to admit, as revolting as it is you really give me a clear image of the sex scenes. I would have to agree with the pizza girl. Your sex scenes aren't very realistic. I do realize that you probably won't see this. I suppose I am a bit mad to waste my time on a paragraph that you probably will never see. Still, I like to get my opinion out there. I have hopes, that one day, you will look back on this story, and see my comment. I believe that you have a talent. The plot is of something out of a novela. I would hate for you to waste such skills. You should consider writing to be a career path for you. It's a great passion, to create a whole world, that belongs to you. Anything you want to happen, will. I certainly hope that you do something with it. I can feel the passion in your words.

You certainly are creative with your sex scenes aren't you? Word of advice, it usually doesn't happen that fast. Good job though. Your stories really keep me on my toes.

@Harrys_wife1114
The guy they put for Chris is from an unpopular polish film that I love

@MysteryWriter

What do you mean?

Hey it's Dominik as Chris! <3

@Harrys_wife1114
Yeah its fine i totally get it u do stuff like that alot :) and yes im reading the sequel and its pretty good

@Kittykatz
Sorry I'm responding so late but lol ya. Sorry about that. 5 Guys, 1 Girl is my main story. This is a story that the main author gave me. Sorry if I didnt change that, some of the readers made it obvious when i types Allison's POV instead of Sky's POV.

Thank you for your opinion, that means a lot to me :) have you checked out the sequel? If you have you really should, it's dramatic, a bit funny, loving, and best of all baby love :)

@Kittykatz
Sorry I'm responding so late but lol ya. Sorry about that. 5 Guys, 1 Girl is my main story. This is a story that the main author gave me. Sorry if I didnt change that, some of the readers made it obvious when i types Allison's POV instead of Sky's POV.

Thank you for your opinion, that means a lot to me :) have you checked out the sequel? If you have you really should, it's dramatic, a bit funny, loving, and best of all baby love :)

Haha just_allysa i read your story 5 guys one gurl and your so used to allison that you type allisons pov instead of sky, but great job working on the story

@Harrys_wife1114
I get it thanks

@Riley_Tomlinson

When you're writing at the top of the writing box you should see a selection of options. If you click on the "button" that looks like a link, almost looks like the number 8, you can paste the image link and then You can replace the link with a word or a couple. Make sense? Lol im terrible at explaining things, sorry.

Hey huge fan of this book. I was wondering how do you add photos. Like the word changes a color and when you touch that word it goes to the photo? Please answer it would help me a lot. Well thanks :)

Is it bad I read this all in one day? I love it ad in happy trot is another one. :)

Woah. I don't know if I am on Team Sammy or Sky. But lately Sky has been acting like a bitch. I don't know! LOVE THIS STORY!

I love it!!!!!!!!!

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@Bella Flores
u are all fighting over whos right or wrong they are right the title has the word slut in it so its not anyone elses fault that your cousin didnt pay attion to the title or the fact that it says rated r for a reason

@Bella Flores

Ok it's time for you to shut up and leave this argument right here, right now. It's done, it's over. You don't like my story, I get it. Now goodbye.

@Bella Flores

you know, I'm like so done with you. Go ahead call me whatever you want, just remember that you're the one who's being a bully here. You don't like the story, well here's an idea, DON'T READ IT.

You say you write because you enjoy writing, well didn't you ever think that they did the same? People come here and write 'fiction'. There not here to write about fucking 'Santa Claus'.

Frankly, I'm not going to call your cousin disgusting or whatever cause I don't know her/him. What I fo know is that she made a bad choice in reading this story. Not because is inappropriate but because she KNEW it was fucking inappropriate for someone her age to read.

As far as me being a"big cunt" as you put it, I think that was very rude &immature of you. First time you wrote your irksome comment, you said you didn't want to be a bully. Well guess what, You are now.

If you think that 13 years old are the one writing stories like such, why are you posting all this horrible comments on their story? if you're trying to set an example for your cousin, best believe you failed. Miserably at that.

Well I'll end this with a 'fuck you & have a nice day'.