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The Slut

Chapter 31

SKY's POV

"First of all I want you both to know that the baby is fine and perfectly healthy," the doctor says. Harry and I let out a loud sound of relief.

"We didnt find any sign of force entry. No vaginal damage. No sperm or seamen," she says.

"So what does that mean?" Harry says.

"Are you sure you were raped?" She asks me.

"Uh.... Yes!" I yell.

"Where are the detectives?" She asks.

"They went to question Chris."


CHRIS's POV

I lay on my bed thinking about the events that took place last night. My thoughts get interrupted when I her a loud bang on the front door.

I run down the stairs. I open the door and see a man and woman.

"Hi. I'm detective Julie and this is my partner Detective Joe. May we come in?" The woman says.

"Sure," i open the door wider for them.

"What's your name, son?" The man asks.

"Chris. Why are you here?" I ask. They quickly turn to eachother.

"Where were you last night between 9pm and midnight?" Julie asks.

That at bitch better not have called the cops.

"My sister's Sweet 16," I say calmly.

"Anyone see you there?"

"Ya. Everyone. I was in my sister's court," I snap.

"Hmm... Is your sister here?" He asks.

"No!"

"What's going on here?" Mom walks in.

"Excuse me, who are you?" She walks over to the detectives. They introduce them selves.

"Is there something we can help you with?" Mom says.

"Where was your son between 9pm and midnight last night?" The woman asks.

"My daughter's Sweet 16? What is the meaning of this?" She snaps.

"We have a young lady claiming that your son, Chris, kidnapped her. Chris, she said more. Is there something you need to tell us?" Joe says.

"She's crazy!" I yell angered by the bitch that ratted me out.

"You guys need to leave. Your invitation to stay had expired. Get out!" my mother yells.


Notes

Sorry it's short I've been workin on my Austin Mahone Fanfiction. Please Read it

thanks guys. Love you.

Comments

I've never been a fan of fanfiction myself, however, I was quite curious as to what fans write about their beloved boy band. I have to admit I find some of these stories to be amusing. I am a writer. It almost inspires me to write a fanfic. Then, I realize how much of a waste of time it is. That is for me. For you however, I believe you have a talent. I have to admit, as revolting as it is you really give me a clear image of the sex scenes. I would have to agree with the pizza girl. Your sex scenes aren't very realistic. I do realize that you probably won't see this. I suppose I am a bit mad to waste my time on a paragraph that you probably will never see. Still, I like to get my opinion out there. I have hopes, that one day, you will look back on this story, and see my comment. I believe that you have a talent. The plot is of something out of a novela. I would hate for you to waste such skills. You should consider writing to be a career path for you. It's a great passion, to create a whole world, that belongs to you. Anything you want to happen, will. I certainly hope that you do something with it. I can feel the passion in your words.

You certainly are creative with your sex scenes aren't you? Word of advice, it usually doesn't happen that fast. Good job though. Your stories really keep me on my toes.

@Harrys_wife1114
The guy they put for Chris is from an unpopular polish film that I love

MysteryWriter MysteryWriter
5/5/14

@MysteryWriter

What do you mean?

Hey it's Dominik as Chris! <3

MysteryWriter MysteryWriter
4/23/14