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The Slut

Chapter 30

HARRY's POV

"We can explain that later. I just need you to. One over to the hospital off of the main highway," she says. I hang up on her and run down the stairs. The guys are chasing after me

"SHE'S AT TE HOSPITAL!" I yell before sliding into the limo.


SKY's POV

"We have your results from the kit," a nurse says to me.

"If you dont mind i would like to wait for my... My boyfriend," I say. What was i supposed to call him?

"Ok. Thats fine," the lady says.

ZAYN's POV

We finally get to hospital. The desk clerk guy told us what room number Sky was in. We bolted up the stairs because the elevator was taking too long. When we finally get to her room a police officer stops us.

"Woah, Woah, Woah. Slow down guys," he says to us.

"Is Sky Edwards in there?!" Liam asks.

"Who are you?" He says crossing his arms.

"I'm Harry. I'm-I'm her boyfriend. The baby's father," Harry says in a panic voice.

"Alright, alright. You come here," he grabs Harry's arm, "You guys need to wait here." He points to the chairs outside of the room. We all roll our eyes.

"No, I'm going in there! She's like my best friend! I need to see her!" I yell trying to get past him.

"Sir if you dont back up I will cuff you!" He threatens.

Liam and Louis jump to my side and pull me away from the door.

"Just stay here," Harry says before he walks in. I hear Sky shriek his name.

It it feels like the world has just been lifted off my shoulders.


HARRY's POV

I run over to Sky and hug her tightly. I grab her face and smash my lips onto hers. She giggles a little.

I start to cry," We were so worried about you."

"I'm so sorry," she grabs my hands.

"W-What happened?"

"Chris. He 'drugged' me, if you will. He took me to his house and... And.... He raped me," she says trying to hold back tears.

I feel my body fill with anger. Someone hurting my Sky like that?! Someone touching her the way I only have.

"I'm sorry Harry," she sobs into her hands.

"Don't you say sorry! You didnt do anything wrong. That bastard did!" I yell punching the wall.

"Woah calm down buddy," a woman says.

"Detective Julie, we spoke on the phone."

" I was told that the baby daddy was here and that we can now discuss your results," a female doctor says,

My heart drops. Results? From what?

That's When it hits me. Can she miscarriage because of sexual activity?


Comments

I've never been a fan of fanfiction myself, however, I was quite curious as to what fans write about their beloved boy band. I have to admit I find some of these stories to be amusing. I am a writer. It almost inspires me to write a fanfic. Then, I realize how much of a waste of time it is. That is for me. For you however, I believe you have a talent. I have to admit, as revolting as it is you really give me a clear image of the sex scenes. I would have to agree with the pizza girl. Your sex scenes aren't very realistic. I do realize that you probably won't see this. I suppose I am a bit mad to waste my time on a paragraph that you probably will never see. Still, I like to get my opinion out there. I have hopes, that one day, you will look back on this story, and see my comment. I believe that you have a talent. The plot is of something out of a novela. I would hate for you to waste such skills. You should consider writing to be a career path for you. It's a great passion, to create a whole world, that belongs to you. Anything you want to happen, will. I certainly hope that you do something with it. I can feel the passion in your words.

You certainly are creative with your sex scenes aren't you? Word of advice, it usually doesn't happen that fast. Good job though. Your stories really keep me on my toes.

@Harrys_wife1114
The guy they put for Chris is from an unpopular polish film that I love

MysteryWriter MysteryWriter
5/5/14

@MysteryWriter

What do you mean?

Hey it's Dominik as Chris! <3

MysteryWriter MysteryWriter
4/23/14