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@Niallsgirl1
Your review is up! :)

@xXKaleighStyles57Xx
You're welcome!

@One Direction 1O1
Thank you so much <333 :) xoxx

@xXKaleighStyles57Xx
We'll get on it right away, hun :)

Name: xXKaleighStyles57Xx
Story Name: Headmaster Styles
Link: Link
Short Summary: Anastasia is made to move in with Harry Styles in his big Bently Mansion. She wants to have fun, but he has things to do. The more they talk, the more there tension grows. But people who hate learn to love. Could they learn to love?
What certain things would you like me to focus on: I would like you to focus on my writing skills. I want to know what I need to focus more on and how I need to improve. I would also like to know if you like it anyways :)
Why do you think your review is necessary: I just want to know what I need and what I don't need. Plus, I need some advice on the way I'm rolling my wheel with this story if you know what I mean x

Thank you :) xoxx

@icedtea.
I see you only have two chapters, and we can't do a review until you have five of more chapters, because two chapters doesn't give us enough about the story to review it. So once you have five chapters or more, we'll do a review for the story. :)

@Elicia_Felix
Yeah, sure. We'll get on it right away, dear.

@XOMalina TomlinsonXO
I totally understand. I just want to help you have a successful story. I support you 100%! Anything you need help with please ask. And I definitely will! :)

Can you do review for hero and i should have known.?

Can you review my story Bad Girl City?

@One Direction 1O1

Don't take this the wrong way, because it's not to be mean but since you have all these great idea's of how my story could be better then maybe you should message me and let me know how. As for grammar. I'm Dyslexic and grammar is hard for me. When I type, if a word is spelled wrong to you, it looks perfectly right to me. But I do respect your honesty to me. It makes me a respected you more as a person. Thanks for the advice but as for fixing grammar that will that will difficult for me. Me and My co-author have been talking about deleting it. And we just might and make a different story. Maybe a Larcel story. I don't know but thanks. But if you do have better Ideas that I could do for this story before I delete then message me, Because I would love to hear what you have.

@One Direction 1O1

Ok thanks

@One Direction 1O1

Okay, thank you.

@XOMalina TomlinsonXO
Your review is up! :)

@Vanilla.
You're welcome, hun. :D

@One Direction 1O1
Yayy! Thanks for taking your time on this story!

@Niallsgirl1
We'll get on it right away. Should be up soon.

@One Direction 1O1

Great!

Mona xP
Deadly (http://www.5secondsofsummerfanfiction.com/Story/67534/Deadly/)
It's basically about a girl named Iris is kidnapped by a deadly gang named 5 Seconds Of Summer. Then shit goes down with other gangs.
Grammar and plot please.
Because I don't want to think my story sucks and that I should just take it down.

Thanks!

@XOMalina TomlinsonXO
My pleasure :)