The Night It All Went Down - Comments, page 2

@niallsprincess84
Well, it'll all come out eventually :) Hope you enjoy the rest of the updates! X

@Night_Owl
she seems shady idk, just a guess

@niallsprincess84
Hmm....I've had a couple of people suggesting that one!
Have you read the latest chapter yet?
It's not looking good for Lou, I know, but I assure you she's got her reasons for acting so suspiciously! :)

@Night_Owl
i think possibly Lou Teasdale may have had her hands in it....

@niallsprincess84
Oh good :) I panicked I'd misspelled something or other and it made no sense! I'm not the most observant of people lol :)

@Xxmorgiexx

really good theory

@Night_Owl
no, i'm still trying to figure who killed paul...... keep up the awesome work

@Xxmorgiexx
Hmm... I quite like the sound of your theory actually!
Lou does have her reasons, I assure you!
I can see where your idea came from!
Thanks for commenting by the way :)

Omg I love it and as I'm reading threw I can see who might have done it if you think about it Lou left early Lou was the only other person there at the hotel
besides Simon Lou and Kayleigh are close but Lou will do anything to save her own ass this is just my therory

@niallsprincess84
Okay, what are you confused about? Is it anything I can change?

i think..... well i am confused.....

Great update!!!!

Please update soon!

Your a magnificent writer!!!

@Eden Styles
Thank you! I'm hoping you like my future updates too :) I can't wait to see what you all think of it by the end! :)

@broadway.bound
Thank you! It means a lot to me to even have just one person who likes my story :)

Wow I love the update! :) keep up the good work girly

OMFG.... it's so good so far can't wait to read more

This is really good :) looking forward to the next update