Dreaming Of You // If I'm Still Dreaming - Comments, page 83

@not_any_maryjane
Thanks for explaining that darling. That is what I meant, and that makes a lot more sense now, thank you for explaining that for me. And that makes so much sense because well, must boys are so oblivious to so much it's almost impossible for them to have a good, in depth character and with their inability to read in between the lines most of the time it makes sense that Harry would have a blunter, more unfaceted point of view. So no, you are most definately not failing spectatularly. :) I just hadn't thought about it like that. (To tell you the truth I probably wouldn't have thought of that if you hadn't replied.) <3 thanks

@niallsgrrrl3

Hey! Thank you for stopping by and commenting! It's so great to listen to what you have to say about all this. And you got me thinking! You got me thinking hard actually and I love it. Usually writers don't explain themselves but this is what's so wonderful about Fan Fiction. We got the occasion to exchange ideas. I hope that what you feel as lacking humanism be only the perspective I chose to write the story at this point. Harry is not a great thinker, neither much of an observer. He's misses a lot. In fact, I feel quite guilty because I keep so much away from him. The boys are teasing him, but they will help him to fill the blank spaces. Or maybe I'm just failing spectacularly!!! You tell me ;) No, please, I'm being honest. Just tell me!

xo

@mikkemille

Great chapter! Great chapter! We want more! xo

I love the perspective of this story. From experiance I know that the boys' assumptions are correct. Us girls can't help but add a little bit of our own reality into the story. I've noticed that brings the writer closer to the characters and makes it easier to write. Why is it that our darling DreamingOfYou is so secretive? (Of course I agree with her, not disclosing personal information and such) But would it kill you to have a little sample from her prespective? She really is so layered; but I've found that while Harry and the boys are more in-depth than they usually are, they lack a certain haumanism that I can tell you are striving toward. The plot is very interesting and I can't wait to watch you peel back the layers of this mystery. I also noticed that there aren't any mis-spellings and I greatly appreciate that. Please continue, I must admit I did fangirl a few times in there over the character buildup.
Good luck and tschuss.

@not_any_maryjane
@marte

Just updated Big Hot Mess ;) x

@marte

Hey! So good to have you around! How are you? Thank you so much! Go tell Mikkemille to update Big Hot Mess xD

xo

Love this!! Great story! :) Keep it up! x

@mikkemille

Please, update Big Hot Mess!!! ;) xo

Hi! Keep up the good work! I love this story and I can't wait to see what happens next! :) xx

@Morgan_who

Hi! ;) So glad to have you here and for you to say 'hello'!

@Ciao Niccie

Thank you so much for your words. You are too kind! It's a true honour coming from you, you know. You, Mikkemille, Delilah and some other girls are my inspiration to write. I hope not to let you down with this xD

Thanks for updating!

I was a lil behind on the Bizarre Love Triangle story but I'm making my way. But this piece... Goodness! So original and refreshing! You really get inside your characters heads, especially in the 1D boys minds, portraying such accuracy or a real closeness. I love your style of writing in both stories, very sophisticated and yet effortless. Looking forward to more chaps ;)

@mikkemille
I just wrote on your comments but, again, thank you so much! I'm so glad you like this baby because I love Big Hot Mess! I'll try to update very soon! Can wait to see what happens. Totally adicted!

xo.

So I read your fanfic just now, and I obviously love it! How could I not?...

I love the whole concept of your story too! So original and well written! Even though you've just started on it, I think it's my favourite one so far ;)

Please update as soon as possible! In return, I'll update BigHotMess! ;) xo

@HeyItsGabi
Hey, Gabi, thank you!!! So good to have you around. I'm updating quite soon xo.

Ahhhhhh this is so freaking amazing! PLEEAASSEEE update again soon!!

:) DIDDO

@Bea.xx

Thank you!!! So glad to have you around!

Great story. keep up.