In a Heartbeat - Comments, page 2

First off, I'm glad you'll always continue @iceskatez :)
But for tattoo ideas, she would MAYBE get wills name on either or wrist or the bottom of her shoulder blades (the things that you can feel when you push your shoulders right back), or some thing like hope or joy or an infinity sign. But that may be too cliche, so simply to prove a point she may get coffee tattooed somewhere on her body. Only you can tell with that girl.

@ThatRebelUnicorn

i know, right? I'm trying to get that through to readers, and we all hate our dads sometimes but I'm writing chapters like the last one so I can get readers to envisage (VOCAB WORD!!!!) what their life would be like without their dad so they can see how hard Melanie's life is going to be.
But I have my plans.... *wrings hands and laughs evilly* My plans that you are aware of.

@HopelessDream

I try. :)

I'm thinking about writing a story for entirely cliché stuff like that just to prove a point. I'm so gonna do that now. Like, have the main character go clubbing, her ex-boyfriend finds her there and beats her up, select member of 1D finds her, beats up her boyfriend, brings her to a hospital where she has multiple stitches, four broken bones, and a black eye and they let her go as soon as she wakes up and so on so forth. She'll have sex with said boyband member and get pregnant on the second date.
Whaddya think? Not cliché enough? I'll add vampires. Haha. XD

@fascinated
Tattoo ideas. Unless you have some really good story ideas. Just for little moments. I think I have most of the big ideas already planned out.
And AWWWWWW!!!!! I love you! You just made my day with that comment! And believe me, my day has sucked. I've had this eternal wedgie (finally got boyshorts instead of bikinis for underwear cut) and just came home from school with an upset stomach, so you really brightened my day. I'm gonna keep on writing. Even thought I don't have many readers, I'll keep writing for the few I do have. :)

Even if nobody else comments, can you please keep on writing? for me? Because you haven't wasted a year of your life. You've spent it giving one of the greatest gifts. Joy. Every time I see this updated I can't but help smile. Because you are such an amazing author that I am filled with happiness, because I know that whatever happens you will keep on writing, and even though they don't express it, joy. And please don't take away that, because I need it.

Do you mean ideas for the story @iceskatez?

@iceskatez
I love how your stories are so realistic. Once I read a story about a girl who bumped into Niall and they instantly fell in love. That is... Weird.

aawww Melanie is so cute!!! and that ending is so sad :( I'd hate to never know my dad. He may wake me up too early, embarrass me in front of my friends, walk up to the school to pick me up, dance weirdly, sing in front of people though he very well can't to embarrass me, not know how to work the app we got for Girl Scouts, not understand all of my girl emotions that I can't even understand myself, know what to do when I'm on my period, tell me how to do my math wrong, and a lot of other stuff, but I'd hate not to have him in my life.

@fascinated

That's fine.
:P I can still say it. it just won't be true. :)
Neither can I. Got any ideas? Message eme if you do. I want it to be a secret. :)

So sorry about the mistake @iceskatez. It won't happen again ;)
And you can't say that I love British culture more simply because I love tea, because I think I actually like America more than England (mainly because you have a Disneyland/world). Plus, my mother loves coffee yet loves England so much he lived over there for 2 years. So there.
And I can't wait for Melody to get her tattoo :)

@HopelessDream

She wouldn't be getting a tattoo in this story. I'm planning for this to be a trilogy, so it would be in the next installment. I try to make my stories as realistic as possible, so since Melody's parents wouldn't agree to a tattoo, she won't be getting on In this one.
It doesn't stop your growth. It just slows it down, which is why it's not recommended for young children.

I'm sorry I haven't commented because I haven't been on for awhile and I'm working on a chapter but that's no excuse. I personally don't think that Melody should get a tattoo because I don't think she's old enough to get one. And I like coffee better even though I think it stops your growth or something.

@fascinated

And when you said "your" because you said "your the author", it should've been "you're" because you're saying "you are the author" and apostrophes go in place of numbers that aren't there (E.I.: Class of '99) and letters that aren't there (E.I.: you are = you're because there's no A in you're).
That just ticked off my inner grammar Nazi, so I needed to tell you.
:)

@fascinated

I, as a matter of fact, can blame it on your culture. You obviously love the British culture more than American culture, so therefore, you are British at heart.
And to think I thought this was the start of a beautiful friendship. But alas, now I must hate you because you are a tea-lover.
Just kidding. My besterestest friend in the whole wide world can't drink coffee, so she drinks tea. All. The time.

And no, Melody isn't of age to get a tattoo without parental consent. But I didn't say she was getting one NOW. Trust me. I've kinda sorta maybe based Mel off me (minus the no fangirling part. That SO would've happened. And I'm not clumsy, so... yeah), so she's deathly afraid of needles. And pain in general. It's going to be a colorful chapter in the sequel when she gets her tattoo. It really, really is.

I, personally, prefer tea (and I am neither British nor American so you can't blame it on my culture), but that is just my opinion. And with Melody getting a tattoo, it isn't legal for her, is it? But if she felt that it is something that represents her, she should! But your the author and you decide ;)

But I don't like coffee or tea… It was still a cute chapter tho :) and I'm still waiting for the unizompocalypse btw.

@fascinated

I'm about to post the next chapter (which I've been slaving over for 12 hours straight). It's 6 am, so you'd better fucking love me 'cause I haven't gotten much sleep at all since Christmas (Mom's mistake. She got me a Kindle. I blame her. And global warming, because global warming is responsible for everything now).

Actually I don't know a Skype thing about twitter @iceskatez, but I'll pretend I do ;) And I'm glad you can update now!!!

@fascinated

I have a Kindle, and it makes LOTS of mistakes. But my laptop isn't giving me the middle finger anymore, so I can update now.
And Marellody wouldn't work on Twitter because it's so long. It WOULD, but it wouldn't. You know?

You can do stuff in an iPod or whatever if you have one, because that's how I do pretty much everything on this site but it works fine for me. And I still like Marellody, although I don't understand why it would matter on twitter.