Pandemonium - Comments, page 2

Awww shay trusts Niall! That's so cute

what do you mean before Niall's time is up?

They better find out what's going on because no way is Niall going to disappear.

Niall and shay would be so cute! I ship Shiall!!! I love this story so much, it's the fist supernatural/semi-supernatural one I've read that's not just plain weird.cant wait for more :)

@raylee
ooh right i forgot about Dani and ashton

@crushingonniall
@Lazylazerpants is right. Ashton and Danielle are siblings, and Ashton is best friends with Harry from school. Then you have Niall and Luke who are best friends...so right now you have six people who the story follows..

@zaynisthebestest- Thank you xx

@crushingonniall
Ashton is in the story, she just wrote Luke by accident in chapter 2 when she meant ashton. He's still in it =]

@raylee
so ashton won't be in this fanfic?then you should probably change tje picture of ashton to a pic of luke:( i just really like ashton's smile

I'm already In love with Niall! And him and shay should be together. Nay.....Shiall. What ever it is I ship them

@crushingonniall
Thanks =))
There is a chapter I worte Luke instead of Ashton, but I fixed it... This time I meant Luke.. Him and Niall are a package deal.. you'll learn of their friendship later...

oh and you mentioned luke in your chapters don't you mean ashton?

woah 'krav maga' ey? i like that you made niall a tough guy and i do think him and shay would be good together although with harry around? i don't think so.. can't wait for next chapter:)x

@Lazylazerpants
Really? I am going to go through it now.. I write before bed so there are so many mistakes... thanks!!

Oh my god i love this I can't wait for more!

I absolutely love this story!!! Can't wait till the next update!

Hey just a heads up, in the beginning you kept saying Luke when I'm pretty sure you meant Ashton. Anyway, great chapter! Can't wait for an update

is it niall?? luke? who? o.m.g I'm so excited!!:) x love this fanfic

I love it! But just a tip, we can't read your mind so you have to explain some things a little better. But it's really a good story.

Oh wow I don't usually read fics where something sort of supernatural/disastrous happens but I am definitely subscribed to this!

@Elsa Love's One Direction
ME TOO!!:)X