Escape {Larry Stylinson/Doctor Who} NEW AU - Comments

This story is awesome. I love Doctor Who

@WontStopTill1DStops

thank you, dear xx i really appreciate it!

@onedirectioninthetardis
Aww, don't worry. I'm sure you'll do it justice! You are an amazing writer

@WontStopTill1DStops
Thank you love! It's the one I'm having the hardest time with! :(

Yeeeeeeeeessssss! I am so in love with this story! I can't wait for the next update and I hope you work on this story more because it is absolutely perfect!

Yeeeeeeeeessssss! I am so in love with this story! I can't wait for the next update and I hope you work on this story more because it is absolutely perfect!

@WontStopTill1DStops
Haha :* I'll update soon! Untouchable face is next :)

@onedirectioninthetardis
Yay! I didn't think you'd see my comment! I'm so excited! XD

@WontStopTill1DStops
I will asap! I have like part of the next chapter done. I want it to be good!

Hi, love! Are you ever going to update this?? I keep rereading it, and I hope you can at least do one more chapter. :) Much love!

I love doctor who! update soon xx

Yes, it was a little nitpicking and I admitted to that and I am sorry, it's just how I am. I really, really do love your writing though, so please don't be discouraged. =) I can't wait for you to update. =) I love Doctor Who and I love Larry so this story seems kind of perfect for me. =)

@charlie2cute
I'm not trying to overreact but the majority of your comment was nitpicking. I would love to be able to go back and edit but I've just now been able to begin that process with my very first story so I know I won't be able to with this one for a while. I'm sorry if I seemed pissed off. I really wasn't; it was just a bit discouraging. You were polite so thank you for that.

Umm, did you not read my comment? I said I liked a lot, it was just minor things and I told you not to get offended. You are my favorite author so far. I was trying to make a small critique and be polite, so please don't act I was bashing you or anything like that.

I said I loved it, but I wish you would fix some of these things. No need to overreact, please.

@charlie2cute
Okay first of all, if you don't like my writing, then don't read it. I hardly have time to write fanfiction as it is, and when I do get to write, it's often in the middle of the night. But I go to a university full time and work on top of that. I don't even read my updates before I post them. If that makes me a terrible writer, so be it. My fanfiction is not my life's work. I write lots of other things, too.

I catch myself mixing up the tenses constantly since some of my stories have different tenses. I know it isn't an excuse, but I don't edit so it's impossible for me to catch everything.

Like ive said before, none of my stories represent my opinion on reality. It doesn't matter what I think about Harrys sexuality because it's fiction, and I don't personally know these things about him from experience.

Love the Doctor! <3 I think he should've asked Harry before taking him to another planet xD, but other than that, pretty great. I hope you update soon! =) I can't wait to meet Louis. =)

Is it Fading by any chance?

So a couple of things that bother me (pls don't take it personally, it's just the editor in me. xD You are a really good writer and I'm just trying to help you improve even more): one, you have some mix-up with the tenses. Mostly you write in present, but you slip in past sometimes.

The other is it's supposed to be a very in-the-moment with Harry's narration and using 1st person present, but with stuff like "more on that in a moment," you are kind of breaking the fourth wall and/or slipping into a dairy-style narrative.

I mean those are minor things, but considering how good you write, they kind of stick out. Obviously, I am enjoying the story quite a lot though. Can't wait to see what happens. =)

By the way, I have to ask, do you think Harry is gay in RL, or is it just how you've decided to write him in the fanfic? 'Cause I'm pretty sure he's bi (he was openly bi before Modest!). Obviously it's a fanfic, so I get why you chose to write him like that, I was just curious.

@charlie2cute
Lol one of my favorites is actually written by a 15 year old on wattpad!

@onedirectioninthetardis

I'm 20. You can really tell that the Larry shippers are the older part of the fandom. And we write the best fan fiction! xD =)

@charlie2cute
Thanks I'm glad you like it. And no I don't mind. I'm 21