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Hi! If you all could check out my fanfic Let Go it would mean the world to me. One of 2, of my best friends, is not a directioner and thanks that writing my fanfic is a waist of time. So if you all could please just check it out, and if u like it comment and subscribe so I can prove my friend wrong it would mean a lot! If I get 50 subscribers and some comments she told me she would apologies and wear a 1D shirt to school with me. So PLEASE check it out, it would mean so much to me, and if you don’t like it its fine but if you do great! Thank you so much! ~M
Chapter one:
Amy's POV.
"Harry and Josh please stop talking and Amy and perrie, i have told you speak in English, i know you want to keep up with your spanish, but you are both english and now in a english school" Miss Johnson said strictly. " Actually... Amy you go and sit at the back of the class with harry, and josh you up here with perrie" she said pleased with herself. I huffed... me and perrie both lived in spain together, now we move here with her, now we arent even allowed to sit together. But i have to now sit next to a eight year old idiot...
"Hey, I am Harry Edward Styles, and you are??" He questioned. "Amy Smith" i said shyly. I have never really spoken to a boy before. "Nice to meet you, and it is so neat that you speak spanish" He said running his hands through his wild curly hair. That night Perrie teased me that i fancy Harry.I simply replied " we are.......... Bestfriends i guess"
The next day Josh and Harry ran over, Josh shouted "Amy you think Harry is 'your' bestfriend dontcha" before i got time to reply he was gone, leaving me alone with Harry. He whisped " i like the sound of being your BBFF" Then ran off.
Amy's POV.
"Harry and Josh please stop talking and Amy and perrie, i have told you speak in English, i know you want to keep up with your spanish, but you are both english and now in a english school" Miss Johnson said strictly. " Actually... Amy you go and sit at the back of the class with harry, and josh you up here with perrie" she said pleased with herself. I huffed... me and perrie both lived in spain together, now we move here with her, now we arent even allowed to sit together. But i have to now sit next to a eight year old idiot...
"Hey, I am Harry Edward Styles, and you are??" He questioned. "Amy Smith" i said shyly. I have never really spoken to a boy before. "Nice to meet you, and it is so neat that you speak spanish" He said running his hands through his wild curly hair. That night Perrie teased me that i fancy Harry.I simply replied " we are.......... Bestfriends i guess"
The next day Josh and Harry ran over, Josh shouted "Amy you think Harry is 'your' bestfriend dontcha" before i got time to reply he was gone, leaving me alone with Harry. He whisped " i like the sound of being your BBFF" Then ran off.
STARSTRUCK
A Fan Fiction By:
Makenzie Weber
Enjoy!
"Matt, get the clothes from the washer and put them in the dryer!"
"Yes, Mother!" I called back, geting up. My sisiter looked up from her laptop. She waswatching the video diaries of whats-their-faces, All Directions? One Way Street? Something like that.
"Mattalyn, get me water while you're at it?" She asked.
"Get it yourself, Beckey. I'm not your servant." I said, walking away. I did the chore, then walked upstairs, prepairing for school which started the next day. My friend, Candy, was a fan of the same band that Beckey is. Me, on the other hand, am a fan of country music. I grabbed my iPod and layed down on my bed. Jana Kramer's Keep Wanting You came on. I started singing along with her.
Out of all the places,
In this little town,
You just had to come walkin' in here and sit down.
The song ended and I looked down in surprise. Oh, it only had 20 seconds left. Bummer. :( Oh well. Carie Underwood's Blown Away came on next and I practiced for the fall talent show. I spent the next three hours practicing on my singing then I happened to look at the time. 10:30 P.M. Crap! I'd better go to sleep if I wanted to wake up on time. I fell asleep thinking about school schedules and him.
My rapist.
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BEEP BEEP BEEP BE-
My alarm clock screamed at me. I smacked the off button before getting up. I looked in the mirror only to see my eyes were rimmed in red and puffy, signalling that I cried myself to sleep the previous night. I did the morning routine, gettin' up, gettin' dressed, HEY! THIS REMINDS ME OF A SONG! Rascal Flatts, What Hurts The Most!
"I can take the rain on the roof of this empty house
That don’t bother me
I can take a few tears now and then and just let them out
I’m not afraid to cry every once in a while
Even though going on with you gone still upsets me
There are days every now and again I pretend I’m ok
But that’s not what gets me
What hurts the most
Was being so close
And having so much to say
And watching you walk away
And never knowing
What could have been
And not seeing that loving you
Is what I was tryin’ to do
It’s hard to deal with the pain of losing you everywhere I go
But I’m doin’ It
It’s hard to force that smile when I see our old friends and I’m alone
Still Harder
Getting up, getting dressed, livin’ with this regret
But I know if I could do it over
I would trade give away all the words that I saved in my heart
That I left unspoken
What hurts the most
Is being so close
And having so much to say
And watching you walk away
And never knowing
What could have been
And not seeing that loving you
Is what I was trying to do
What hurts the most
Is being so close
And having so much to say
And watching you walk away
And never knowing
What could have been
And not seeing that loving you
Is what I was trying to do
Not seeing that loving you
That’s what I was trying to do- OW!" I said, rubbin my arm while glaring at Beckey. She smirked.
"Breakfast's ready. Time to eat, Toby Keith."
"It was Rascal Flatts!" I protested.
"Whatever! Chop chop!" she said, going downstairs. I sighed and changed out of my pjs into a blue slash back tee shirt and black studded skinny jeans with a pair of black Jodi boots. I let my hair tumble down my back, quickly running a brush through it. It was wavey, flipping just the way I liked it. For some reason, I was highly sensitive about my hair. I walked downstairs, only to be ambushed by my 5 year old American Labrador, Jake. I dropped to the ground and he ran over with a tennis ball. I took it outside and threw it a couple times and then I saw the time. I only had an hour before school started! I grabbed my keys and ran to the barn. Ya, I know what y'all are thinking, why did she run to the barn and not the garage? Well it's because I don't have a car, and we have a pasture at the end of the road. So I just ride my horse, Galaxarius, there and back every school day to get picked up by the bus and that's his required exercise. (Not that I don't give him more!) Anyway, I ran to the bar and grabbed the saddle. He was waiting, and it seemed like he ws saying,"Finaly she's here!" I chuckled and checked his hooves. No stones. I ran my hands down his legs. No hotspots. I put on the saddle blanket then the saddle. I attached the reins and the bit as fast as I could. I led him through the stable door and onto the logging road. I galloped down to the pasture, and I jumped the fence. I slowed him down then took off his tack. I hid them in the shed and looked in the mirror. Not a hair out of place. VICTORY IS MINE! I ran out of the shed only to see the bus pull up. I grabbed my bag and ran, climbing over the gate and climbed on the bus. I saw Candy wave me over so I went to sit by her. She took one look at me and said,"Someone's exilerated."
"There is nothing in the world quite like riding a horse downhill as fast as he'll run at 6:45 in the morning." I said in a dreamy voice. Riding was my drug.
"Someone's dreamated."
"Yup." I said, poping the P.
"Hey, are you gunna try to get in the jumping thing at the fair?"
"What jumping thing? I'm entering for the rodeo Queen this year though."
"Good for you!" She said.
"Yep, so what's new with you?" I asked.
"OMG! Guess what I got?" She asked, triumphant. Uh oh, it's a million dollars or somethin' like that.
"What?" I asked wearily.
"IgotticketstoseeOneDirection!" She gushed. What did she say.
"What did you say? Can you say it SLOWER?" I asked.
"I. Got. Tickets. To. See. One. Direction. In. Portland. At. The. Rose. Garden." she said, inbetween whacking me.
"Okay, I would care because?"
"You are going with me." Oh no I'm not.
"Nope. I hate Pop music. Take Beckey instead."
"No! Beckey's such a kill joy." She complained.
"Don't make me go!" I begged.
"You are coming with me! That is final!" She said. "I think Zayn is SO hot." She said, dreamily. The bus pulled up to Mark Morris High School.
"I got to go! I'm meeting Jenna. See ya later!" I shouted over my shoulder. Walking through the halls, I saw Beckey talking and walking beside George Waters, the QB of the football team and my best friend. He was the one who raped me.
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*After School*
"Hey, Mattie, wait up!" George called after me. I walked faster away, pretending I didn't hear him. "Mattie, I know you hear me. Please, turn around." I steeled myself before placing a fake smile on my face.
"Hey George. I have to catch the bus. Later." I turned around to see the bus leaving. "Damn."
"Need a ride? I'm heading out that way. Bruce hired me to help out with the horses." Oh no. Bruce lived right up the hill from me.
"Sure, why not." I replied, nonchantally. "But only to Galaxarius' pasture, okay?"
"Okay. C'mon, mon!" He said. I walke doverto his 2010 Honda Accord. We made small talk all the way to Hackett Road.
"Thanks for the ride." I said as I reached for the door. I heard a click, and I looked up. George had locked all the doors. "Really?" I chuckled nervously.
"What did I do to you, Mattie? Ever since the party at Jenna's, you've been avoiding me and running from me every time you see me." I looked at him and saw utter confusion.
"You were completely wasted. Jenna called me over to drive you home and you pulled me into a room. You raped me then and there, and I ran home. I came back the next day for Galaxarius because I was ashamed of myself." I said, turning away.
"Mattalyn, please look at me. I'm so sorry. If I had known, I wouldn't of done it. Just, please, forgive me." Could I forgive my friend for raping me?
"I-I don't know if I can." I said, looking away.
"Then I'll prove it to you that I didn't mean it." He siad, determinedly.
"Okay, but can you unlock the door first?" I asked, wanting to get out of the car.
"But of course, madame." He said, trying to bow. It didn't really work, seeing as he was buckled up, in the drivers seat of the car. I heard the click, thn scrambled out of the car. I climbed the gate, and whistled for Galax, who came running over. I tacked him up, then rode on home. The whole ride, all I could think about was George and his promise.
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"Ohmigod ohmigod!" Beckey screamed. WHat now? I thought. I looked up from my homeworkand sighed.
"What?"
"IhavefrontrowticketstoseeOneDirection!" She screamed. All I could make out was I tickets One Way Street or something like that. She seemed high- WAIT A SECOND!
"YOU'VE BEEN SNORTING PIXIE STIXS AGAIN, HAVEN'T YOU?!" I screamed at her.
"Nope. But you're coming with me to see the concert. " She said, matter of factly.
"Um, no I'm not. Ican't stand pop music." I reminded her.
"But you have your license and the concerts in Portland and I can't drive." She whined.
"So?" I asked.
"MOM!" she hollered, summoning the mothership.
"Here we go again!" I mumbled.
"I got tickets to see a band but I can't drive and the concerts in Portland."
"When's the concert?" My 'mother' asked.
"Saturday night." She said.
"Sorry, your father and I have to work late."
"Can Mattalyn take me?" she asked, shooting a glance at me.
"I don't see why not." Mom stated, walking away. NOO!!!!
"Then it's settled!" she cried, doing a victory dance in the middle of the living room. NOOOOO!!!! I can't take my bike! D: THE WORLD WILL END!!! I don't have it yet, but I will Friday after school! I was going motorbike shopping! YAY! No more bus! WAIT, WE ONLY HAD TWO CARS AND... Mom and Dad work at the same place. Aww, I can't use that excuse. Too bad.
"Oh, and guess who's opening for them?" Beckey said.
"Who?" Probually Justin Heaver, or someone like that.
"Some country singer... I think his name's Scottie McCreedy or something." YAY! Country singer! I'll go!
"Okay, fine! I'll take you to the stupid concert." I said, happy. I went back to my homework, trying to finish my algebra.
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Beckey POV
Little did my sister know I was lying to her. I mean, c'mon! Why would there bea country singer at a POP concert? It made no sense. Oh well. It doesn't make me a bad person, right? It's not like she's going to meet them... right?
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Mattalyn POV
*After School on Friday*
"Ishould've known by the way you passed me by
There was something in your eyes and it wasn't right
I should've walked, but I never had the chance
Everything got out of hand, and I let it slide
Now I only have myself to blame
For falling for your stupid games
I wish my life could be the way
It was before I saw your face
You stole my happy, you made me cry
Took the lonely, and took me for a ride
And I wanna undo it
You had my heart, now I want it back
I'm starting to see everything you lack
Boy you blew it, you put me through it
I wanna undo it
Na, na, na, na, na
Na, na, na, na, na
Na, na, na, na, na na
Now your photos don't have a picture frame
And I never say your name, and I never will
And all your things, well, I threw them in the trash
And I'm not even sad
Now you only have yourself to blame
For playing all those stupid games
You're always going to be the same
Oh no, you'll never change
You stole my happy, you made me cry
Took the lonely, and took me for a ride
And I wanna undo it
You had my heart, now I want it back
I'm starting to see everything you lack
Boy you blew it, you put me through it
I wanna undo it
Na, na, na, na, na
Na, na, na, na, na
Na, na, na, na, na na
You want my future, you can't have it
I'm still trying to erase you from my past
I need you gone so fast
You stole my happy, you made me cry
Took the lonely, and took me for a ride
And I wanna undo it
You had my heart, now I want it back
I'm starting to see everything you lack
Boy you blew it, you put me through it
I wanna undo it
You stole my happy, you made me cry
Took the lonely, and took me for a ride
Boy you blew it, you put me through it.
I wanna undo it!"
I sang. Then I saw the time. IT WAS TIME, IT WAS TIME!
"MOM! TIME TO GO, NOW!" I yelled, running down the stairs, into the garage.
"Okay,okay! I'm coming!" She yelled back. By the time she got there, I was in the car, bouncing up and down in my seat. She chuckled and started the car. Finaly, we got to the dealership. There it was. My bike. A Kawaski z1000 2012. On display, for only a little bit longer. Why, you ask? 'CUZ I'M BUYING IT, YOU SUCKERS! I ran up to the nearest salesperson.
"Hello, welcome to-"
"I wanna test drive the Kawaski z1000 2012 please." I said, trying not to hop with every word I said. He grabbed a key and helped me wheel it out. He handed me the key and I ran to get my black leather jacket out of the car. The bike started up with no problems, and I took off. YESSS!!! I zoomed along Ocean Beach Highway and across the bridge to Kelso and back again. I loved the feeling of the wind in my face, even though I had my helmet on. I just felt so free, like a birdy! FLY, LITTLE BIRDY, FLY!! I thought, cracking up laughing. When I got back, I hopped off and said,"I'll take it!"
"Actually, honey, I'll pay for it." Mom said, coming up to me.
"Thanks! I'm going to go walk around and maybe get something to eat." I said, walking away. "I'm hungry." I said to no one in particular.
'HELLO HUNGRY, I'M LOUIS!" Someone yelled. I looked around, spotting a group of guys, not 10 feet away from me. One of them was waving a hand around like crazy. I'm guessing that that was Louis.
"Ummm... okay? And I would care because...?" I asked.
"Louis, you idiot! She might fangirl!" One said. Louis ran over to another guy, yelling.
"HAZZA, LIAM'S BEING MEAN!" I wanted to roll my eyes, but oh well.
"Liam! Be nice to my Boobear!" he said, cradling Louis. Umm... gay much? Not that I'm against gays.
"Okay, I got to go." I said, walkin away. "Weirdo's." I mumbled. It was then I saw the sign. The golden arches. "YES! McDonald's it is!" I said, running to the car. I had remembered the keys! Or not? Damn! Oh well, I could walk. I got out of the car, grabbing my wallet, only to see one of the guys standing to feet away.
"Can I come with you?" He asked.
"Ummm... sure, why not." I said. "But we have to walk. No keys." I said dejectedly. I started walking in the direction of the signs and the other guys laughed and followed me. When I turned aroung and looked at them, Louis explained by saying,"If we don't come, Nialler might eat you." I just rolled my eyes and continued walking away. When I got there, I saw Jenna and Candy.
"Candy! I called, walking over there.
"So, you got your bike?" she asked.
"Yup." I said, popping the P. Her phone rang, and a pop song played.
"NOO! POP MUSIC, MY MORTAL ENEMY!" I cried, clutching the table as if for support.
"Hehes." Candy said, sticking out her tounge. I rolled my eyes. Where were me, in second grade?
"Well, I'll be back, I'm hungries." I said, walking into the line. "I'll have a number ten, with a medium fry. Keep the change." I said, handing the cashier a ten. I turned around and bumped into one of Louis' friends. "Sorry." I said, walking away. I got my food, and sat down beside Jenna, killing time.
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Harry POV
We all saw the girl with the long, reddish brown hair jump onto the motorbike.
"10 bucks says she's in a motorbike gang." Zayne said.
"10 says she's a normal girl who loves One Direction." Liam said.
"10 says she's a princess in the PPP." Louis said, sounding crazy. We were used to it by now.
"When's dinner?" Niall asked. "And 5 on her being a Directioner."
"I'm with Liam on this one." I said, watching her drive away. We were in Longview, Washington because we wanted a car. (Well, Liam did.) and even though no one knew where we were staying, Uncle Si figured this was a safe enough distance from Portland. Oh, look, she's back. She walked away from the bike when an older woman came over. I'm guessing it was Mom. She was 10 feet away when she said she was hungry and Louis yelled back. That scene led to us going to McDonalds with her. I paused to put on my hood and sunglasses but when I looked, she was gone. All of a sudden, I heard One Thing playing as a phone rang. I looked around only to see her standing at a girls table.
"Noo! Pop music! My mortal enemy!" She cried out, making us chuckle.
"Looks like Liam, Niall, and Harry owe us $25." Zayn said, smirking. Damn. Oh well. I got in line only to realize I was standing right behind her. She turned around and bumped into me, mumbling,"Sorry." as she walked away. I ordered for the guys then went to sit down at the table they chose.
"Aww, did Harry get rejected?" Niall teased.
"DON'T WORRY, HAZZA! YOU'LL ALWAYS HAVE ME!'' Louis yelled as he lunged across the table. His hood fell off as a group of girls sporting 1D stuff came in. Crap, we are soooo dead!
It all started at the begining of Summer. Bentleigh Riner always hosts the begining of the Summer party. Bentleigh and her boyfriend Jake decide to sneak up to balcony but, when Jake wants Bentleigh to do something she doesn't want him to will things go to far? Don't ask me it's not like I know what happend to the girl that pushed her boyfriend off a balcony at her party. Was it an accident because he was practically raping her or did she just want to kill him? Bentleigh decided to run away. She decided to move to England and start a new life. But, when she gets close to a certain curly haired boy will the truth come out?
SCARS AND LUST.
Hi guys! FictionLover here. I'm new by the way..this is a weird one, so please have patience in reading..I like putting twists at the end. :)
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My life's not as good as anybody have. It's bad, really bad.And I think i'm the most unlucky person in the whole world..
And to whatever made me run that night, my thanks.
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Chapter 1: TOWN
"Savannah, aren't you bringing your old clothes,darling?" Mom asked as I packed my stuff and leaving other clothes on the bed. "Uhm,no. Well their too small for me by the way, I can't wear them." I muttered.
"Okay, it's up to you. Were leaving in a few, so hurry up. The David is waiting for us there."
Oh yeah, David. Mom's new partner.
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We drove our way for what seem about two hours, and mom keep talking to me like "You'll gonna love there," or "The house we got is huge," and so on.
My younger brother Sheen (who was 15) sitting sleepy back at the car snapped at us, "Oh mom,please. Take a break." then chuckled. We all burst in random laughs and thoughts. Well, I might like Washington, and I may not. Since mom met David, they always move alot, leaving me and Sheen in the house. So they decided for us to live with hem..what's my choice? I need mom beside us.
"Were here!" Mom exclaimed and pull in the car.
"We are?" I muttered. Mom nodded with a smile. I get out of the car. 'It's big huh.' I thought to myself.
"Oh my, its real huge to be cleaned on." Sheen said, amused.
We dance our way inside and settle our things in our own rooms, then me and Sheen plan to take a look around the whole village. Mom told us not to take too long.
"Why don't we take our bikes?" Sheen suggested. "Cool." I snapped then running off to the garage. After a few streets, we noticed a house stand all alone in a street named "Acacia". It's weird, it must be a haunted house. But no, there's a car parking in front of the gate,a black porsche. Sheen dared me to go in the street, I'm running my bike slowly but surely. "And don't forget to take a peek at the window!" he shouted. I turn around to him giving him a look, then he raised his elbow
"What? It's a dare."
"Whatever." I mouthed.
I pull my bike right in front of the black porsche. Okay now I'm scared. I turn around to Sheen but he's gone. "What the," I snapped. But then something white catch my eye.
I walk closer to the window,noticing there was an open light..there's somebody home.Due to curiosity, I lean closer and put my head in, I saw a guy lying at the porch, probably sleeping or is he awake? I can't see clearer.
I only see black curls.
Aww thanks, i'M new to this site so still trying to figure out how to work it but This stories called, BELIEVEABLE.
Pain rushed through my head, as I was hit with a blunt metal object, probably a pipe.
'You worthless piece of trash' said a slurred voice behind me.
I felt a foot collide with my abdomine, I crumpled to the floor. Black dotts started to appear in my vision.
The doorbell rang, loudly, but that was just because of my thumping headache.
'Get out of the house, I don't want to see you anywhere near here until 4:00 is that understood? And if you do there will be hell to pay.'
I watched a figure slowly disappear into the foyer to open the front door, I heared a mumble of voices, and I crawled up to my room holding my stomache.
I grabbed my purse and a jumper, I didn't even bother looking in the mirror I knew what I looked like, my face hadn't been without a bruise for almost 6 months now, mostly it was just little slapps and a few insluts, but every nown and again my step dad would get a new found surge of rage, and lets just say I wouldn't be able to leave the house for about a week. I managed to hobble out the back door into the cold London air, it hurt when I tried to suck in the cold air, so I just walked/hobbled to my best friend Clara's house.
'Rachel?' Clara cried 'Your dad?'she said with a sad look on her face
'Yeah' I said
Clara was the person I told everything to, to the first time I had sex, to my parents divorce, my mom moving to Canada and my dad...she had gotten so used to me coming over that it was now no surprise if I came over with a broken nose, or a distorted face.
Clara wanted to tell her mom but I made her promise, He was my dad after all.
'Come on I'm jusst about to go shopping wanna come?' Clara knew exactly how to get my mind of things. She was the best.
'Oh boy do I!' I said with a smile
We walked around with a coffe in our hands and window shopped, this was our thing we never had any money so, we would come to the mall and dream about the the things we would get if we were rich and famous. Clara got a call from her mom so she left for a second to talk to her.
I was just about to take a sip of my coffee when SLAM, suddenly I was on the floor with coffee drenched all over me.
'What the hell?' I said
'Oh My Gosh, I am so sorry!' A boy with curly hair and a strong british accent said
'Are you okay?'
'Okay?, of course I'm not okay I'm drenched in coffee and I hurt my leg fallign over, but what a sweet thing to ask 'Am I okay' well I will tell you know I am not okay!'
I ranted
'Jeez, I..I..m s..s..s..sorry!' the boy stammered
'I'm Harry by the way.'
'You worthless piece of trash' said a slurred voice behind me.
I felt a foot collide with my abdomine, I crumpled to the floor. Black dotts started to appear in my vision.
The doorbell rang, loudly, but that was just because of my thumping headache.
'Get out of the house, I don't want to see you anywhere near here until 4:00 is that understood? And if you do there will be hell to pay.'
I watched a figure slowly disappear into the foyer to open the front door, I heared a mumble of voices, and I crawled up to my room holding my stomache.
I grabbed my purse and a jumper, I didn't even bother looking in the mirror I knew what I looked like, my face hadn't been without a bruise for almost 6 months now, mostly it was just little slapps and a few insluts, but every nown and again my step dad would get a new found surge of rage, and lets just say I wouldn't be able to leave the house for about a week. I managed to hobble out the back door into the cold London air, it hurt when I tried to suck in the cold air, so I just walked/hobbled to my best friend Clara's house.
'Rachel?' Clara cried 'Your dad?'she said with a sad look on her face
'Yeah' I said
Clara was the person I told everything to, to the first time I had sex, to my parents divorce, my mom moving to Canada and my dad...she had gotten so used to me coming over that it was now no surprise if I came over with a broken nose, or a distorted face.
Clara wanted to tell her mom but I made her promise, He was my dad after all.
'Come on I'm jusst about to go shopping wanna come?' Clara knew exactly how to get my mind of things. She was the best.
'Oh boy do I!' I said with a smile
We walked around with a coffe in our hands and window shopped, this was our thing we never had any money so, we would come to the mall and dream about the the things we would get if we were rich and famous. Clara got a call from her mom so she left for a second to talk to her.
I was just about to take a sip of my coffee when SLAM, suddenly I was on the floor with coffee drenched all over me.
'What the hell?' I said
'Oh My Gosh, I am so sorry!' A boy with curly hair and a strong british accent said
'Are you okay?'
'Okay?, of course I'm not okay I'm drenched in coffee and I hurt my leg fallign over, but what a sweet thing to ask 'Am I okay' well I will tell you know I am not okay!'
I ranted
'Jeez, I..I..m s..s..s..sorry!' the boy stammered
'I'm Harry by the way.'
'Rachel, not that it is of any difference' I said trying to wipe of unsucsessfully a bit of the coffee from my hair.
'Hey Harold we gotta go!' another boy yelled from behind
'Okay coming, look I really am so sorry!' He said as he walked away
'Yeah you said that!' I muttered under my breath.
Clara rounded the corner took one look at me and burst out laughing.
'What happened to you?' she said between fits of giggles
'Bloody English!' I said
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2/28/13