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JasperRenee Review!

Our Beautiful Darkness

JasperRenee

Grade: 8

Good Things:

-The futuristic approach to the story is nice because you don’t see it as often.

-I am strangely in love with the concept behind this story. I love it! It is very interesting and unique!

-This story gives off kind of a quirky vibe with the whole Dusty’s-point-of-view thing and I love it!

Things to work on:

-You should do a quick edit of your story. There weren’t very many mistake and it wasn’t horrible but definitely go through and edit. I can help with this if you would like, just let me know!

Would I recommend this to someone else? Yes! I really hope you start feeling better so you can get back to writing this amazing story! Honestly it’s so good and you deserve a lot of reads!

Notes

Comments

slow hands by dainey

Dainey Dainey @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
6/24/17

@Kat21


Hi! I don't normally do this but I'm just gonna get right on it.

The author seems to be busy and you've had a wait. I recently started up a review store so if you're interested you can link your story there.

All you have to do is click my name and follow the form. :-)

InValid InValid @ 5SecondsOfSummerFanfiction.com
12/31/16

@its_simplymuke


Hi! I don't normally do this but I'll just get right on it.

The author seems to be busy and you've had a wait. I recently started up a review store so if you're interested you can link your story there.

All you have to do is click my name and follow the form. :-)

InValid InValid @ 5SecondsOfSummerFanfiction.com
12/31/16

@XMuKeKeTcHuPX


Hi! I don't normally do this but I'm just gonna get right on it.

The author seems to be busy and you've had a wait. I recently started up a review store so if you're interested you can link your story there.

All you have to do is click my name and follow the form. :-)

InValid InValid @ 5SecondsOfSummerFanfiction.com
12/31/16

@Lukeifer


Hi! I don't normally do this but I'm just gonna get right on it.

The author seems to be busy and you've had a wait. I recently started up a review store so if you're interested you can link your story there.

All you have to do is click my name and follow the form. :-)

InValid InValid @ 5SecondsOfSummerFanfiction.com
12/31/16
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