Grammar: Your grammar is amazing, literally! Flawless! I don't even think I saw a single mistake.

Plot Line: Holly shit is this good! When I first read the summary I was hooked. And I loved the Purge, so this story grabbed my attention. Before you even asked for a review I was already subscribed and had already voted. The detail you put into every chapter is ridiculously good! I can picture everything clearly in my head. The characters are well-thought-out and so is the plot line.

Summary: Summary was really good! I think it pulls your attention in and makes you want to read the first chapter; well at least it did for me. It wasn't short and bland, and it also wasn't long and revealed too much.

Cover: I can't get over how neat this cover photo is. It matches the stories tone perfectly- that dark, dreary feel. I can tell you put lots of work into the cover photo. Great job!

Characters: I like how you planned the characters out perfectly. Also, the character guid was a great touch; no one else on the website has done something like that. Each character feels so real, like I connect with them easily throughout every chapter. So nice job on building character.

What should be fixed or changed: Nothing, honestly. I love what's going on in Brontide so far. You have amazing writing skills and know how to write a well-thought-out story, unlike some of these other bullshit stories on here. So props to you, girl.

Overall Rating: 10! I will be continuing this story.

P.S. This story deserves way more votes and subscribes.

Notes

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